for A Draught of Sunshine5/5/2021 c1 HeyCharles
This is a pretty interesting start and you do well in describing the characters, and I'm curious to see how it all progresses. I can't help but suggest that you should join NővelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
This is a pretty interesting start and you do well in describing the characters, and I'm curious to see how it all progresses. I can't help but suggest that you should join NővelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
12/17/2012 c1 Rizuna
I really...I really freaking enjoyed this. I loved it. Omg.
I really...I really freaking enjoyed this. I loved it. Omg.
8/19/2012 c1 
3Justrockzyxxx
Really great story. There's not much i can say as there's not much to improve on but i will say this, SLOW DOWN! Everything got really exciting, really quickly! But overall, great story and i cant wait till you update it.
Roxy
3JustrockzyxxxReally great story. There's not much i can say as there's not much to improve on but i will say this, SLOW DOWN! Everything got really exciting, really quickly! But overall, great story and i cant wait till you update it.
Roxy