
8/7/2012 c1
5sukihana00
I love the idea of this story, it is very original. I especially like your comparison to how her "visions" are a daydream that is more memorable than her dreams at night.
Your cliff hanger is clever, and it has me waiting for more :)

I love the idea of this story, it is very original. I especially like your comparison to how her "visions" are a daydream that is more memorable than her dreams at night.
Your cliff hanger is clever, and it has me waiting for more :)