
8/28/2014 c5 Lucy Hail
Love it Love it Love it ! But please update soon becuase i really love it and i love the way you evolve your characters (sorry for bad english, but it is not my first language)
Love it Love it Love it ! But please update soon becuase i really love it and i love the way you evolve your characters (sorry for bad english, but it is not my first language)
10/19/2013 c5 addicted
hey this is really good i read it all in 30mins! please update
hey this is really good i read it all in 30mins! please update
8/14/2013 c5 Unhappy
Hey!,
Why cant you update already?!
You may have done that chapter very quickly but you sure are taking your sweet time with this next one and as a result you have one very UNHAPPY person so...
UPDATE!
Come on are you trying to kill me?
P.S this is what you wanted right? A review
Unhappy
Hey!,
Why cant you update already?!
You may have done that chapter very quickly but you sure are taking your sweet time with this next one and as a result you have one very UNHAPPY person so...
UPDATE!
Come on are you trying to kill me?
P.S this is what you wanted right? A review
Unhappy
5/19/2013 c5 Updateeeeee
Mrauuuuuuuuuuuuu you need to update!
after i come back from Lisbon, there better be another chapter waiting for me!
Ms A. H wont be happy if there isnt...
Mrauuuuuuuuuuuuu you need to update!
after i come back from Lisbon, there better be another chapter waiting for me!
Ms A. H wont be happy if there isnt...
12/17/2012 c1 Guest
hey this book is so good! i love it and so does my cousin. keep posting
hey this book is so good! i love it and so does my cousin. keep posting
11/30/2012 c5
5PeacockBlue
fab, amazing, truly awsome and more than worthy of your genius. NOW will you reply to my PMs? :P

fab, amazing, truly awsome and more than worthy of your genius. NOW will you reply to my PMs? :P
11/1/2012 c5 T. M. Santos
W-O-W wait what wait just
WHAT HAPPENED?
WHAT IS THAT DEATH AND ARTICLE- did someone die? D:
CURIOUS TO DEATH
W-O-W wait what wait just
WHAT HAPPENED?
WHAT IS THAT DEATH AND ARTICLE- did someone die? D:
CURIOUS TO DEATH
10/27/2012 c3 AH
hey mari how are u?i think this story is fab and my favourite !it has a unique style of writing and it screams u!i like it but i get confused sometimes but hey-ho !hope u enjoy ur holiday !amberXxxx:-*B-)
hey mari how are u?i think this story is fab and my favourite !it has a unique style of writing and it screams u!i like it but i get confused sometimes but hey-ho !hope u enjoy ur holiday !amberXxxx:-*B-)
10/26/2012 c2 TMSantos
I THINK THIS STORY IS ALREADY INTERESTING AND COOL AND I'M HANGING ON FOR THE RIDE UNTIL THE END
I THINK THIS STORY IS ALREADY INTERESTING AND COOL AND I'M HANGING ON FOR THE RIDE UNTIL THE END
10/18/2012 c3
1Milo.Tsubame
The sudden arrival of new characters widen the possibilities! I'm speculating that there may be a Romeo hidden in one of those men *wink wink*
It's been a while since I've had the time to sit down and read, but the past two chapters were definitely worth it. (I apologize that I haven't reviewed last chapter. I humbly accept your rage now.)
As for the plot, I like how you are including Lynn's thoughts about Juliet, and that you are keeping Juliet true to her personality. It takes quite a bit of analysis to fully understand another artist's character, but your interpretation of Shakespeare's delicate yet courageous Capulet is well thought out. I can't wait to read your next chapters, and I thank you for all your hard work in these stories!
-Milo

The sudden arrival of new characters widen the possibilities! I'm speculating that there may be a Romeo hidden in one of those men *wink wink*
It's been a while since I've had the time to sit down and read, but the past two chapters were definitely worth it. (I apologize that I haven't reviewed last chapter. I humbly accept your rage now.)
As for the plot, I like how you are including Lynn's thoughts about Juliet, and that you are keeping Juliet true to her personality. It takes quite a bit of analysis to fully understand another artist's character, but your interpretation of Shakespeare's delicate yet courageous Capulet is well thought out. I can't wait to read your next chapters, and I thank you for all your hard work in these stories!
-Milo
9/16/2012 c1 Guest
This story is so cool. Love the plot line. Well done "Rebel Maru"
This story is so cool. Love the plot line. Well done "Rebel Maru"
9/15/2012 c2 KathrineThornton
Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! oh I can't wait for more please update soon!
Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! oh I can't wait for more please update soon!
8/10/2012 c1 RenEtAl
The premise is original, I think, even if the romance is cliched. But I'm kind of confused as to what the time period is.
The premise is original, I think, even if the romance is cliched. But I'm kind of confused as to what the time period is.