for Game On Loverboy12/20/2012 c5 Curvy Curls
Yannow what's unfair about this story? How perfect it is. Just saying! I'm not jealous! No way! But in all seriousness, this story is aaaawesome and I feel like I'm lucky to be able to read this for free :P
Yannow what's unfair about this story? How perfect it is. Just saying! I'm not jealous! No way! But in all seriousness, this story is aaaawesome and I feel like I'm lucky to be able to read this for free :P
12/14/2012 c5 RubyRed22
Ahh! Why must this be so un-guessable?! I'm perfectly ready for the next update. ;) *holds hands out* I seriously love this story. I'm going to guess that you're the month-and-a-little type updated though. :(
Ahh! Why must this be so un-guessable?! I'm perfectly ready for the next update. ;) *holds hands out* I seriously love this story. I'm going to guess that you're the month-and-a-little type updated though. :(
12/14/2012 c4 RubyRed22
Haha, I was wondering where the brother's best friend thing would come in! The whole time, I was thinking, "How do they have NO romantic feelings for each other?"
Haha, I was wondering where the brother's best friend thing would come in! The whole time, I was thinking, "How do they have NO romantic feelings for each other?"
12/3/2012 c5 Chromatic
Got to say, first of all, awesome chapter!
What I really enjoyed was the in depth zoom on all the different relationships that were built around all the characters. Personally, I'm still waiting for that 'boom' moment when Melissa's attention is drawn over from Aaron to Justin since I think Justin is more of a challenge for her while Aaron is just a far away dream. Though I can see so much drama and complications building up with Chelsea and Melissa.
Also to touch up on the revenge, I thought it was quite clever how it ended up becoming more of a pro for the boys now that they reputation has grown in popularity. And on a random side note (the name Brittney is really entertaining since there is someone in my school who's a guy and nicknamed this and is in a way somewhat stupid but hilarious)
What I guess I hope to see in the future is more one on one time between the two main characters since I feel like it would bring prospective choices and more interesting twists as their friendship grows and such. Anyways, I wish I saw this update earlier but I will forever stalk and follow! Much love to you and good luck on your life in reality too :) can't wait to see the next chapter!
Got to say, first of all, awesome chapter!
What I really enjoyed was the in depth zoom on all the different relationships that were built around all the characters. Personally, I'm still waiting for that 'boom' moment when Melissa's attention is drawn over from Aaron to Justin since I think Justin is more of a challenge for her while Aaron is just a far away dream. Though I can see so much drama and complications building up with Chelsea and Melissa.
Also to touch up on the revenge, I thought it was quite clever how it ended up becoming more of a pro for the boys now that they reputation has grown in popularity. And on a random side note (the name Brittney is really entertaining since there is someone in my school who's a guy and nicknamed this and is in a way somewhat stupid but hilarious)
What I guess I hope to see in the future is more one on one time between the two main characters since I feel like it would bring prospective choices and more interesting twists as their friendship grows and such. Anyways, I wish I saw this update earlier but I will forever stalk and follow! Much love to you and good luck on your life in reality too :) can't wait to see the next chapter!
11/10/2012 c5 ARRRRGHHHH
This is awesome stuff right here! You BETTER update soon, I wanna know what's on the end of that cliffhanger!
This is awesome stuff right here! You BETTER update soon, I wanna know what's on the end of that cliffhanger!
11/10/2012 c5 Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling
This is a cerified amazingly awesome fiction! :) I can't wait for more! And I love Melissa and Justin's relationship (whatever that is...)
This is a cerified amazingly awesome fiction! :) I can't wait for more! And I love Melissa and Justin's relationship (whatever that is...)
11/9/2012 c5 Scarlet Mist
I have to say, this chapter was the best chapter so far. I really feel you've gone deep into the characters and their thoughts are much clearer after this chapter. You're writing style is great and I really do find myself laughing at some moments of your story which is a nice touch. Thank you for this chapter, and as always, I'm looking forward to the next.
I have to say, this chapter was the best chapter so far. I really feel you've gone deep into the characters and their thoughts are much clearer after this chapter. You're writing style is great and I really do find myself laughing at some moments of your story which is a nice touch. Thank you for this chapter, and as always, I'm looking forward to the next.
11/9/2012 c5 BrightenTheDark
I'm so glad you updated! When I saw the alert in my email I was over the moon! :D
This chapter was definitely worth the wait and you left a cliffhanger? Arghh... but I hope you update soon next time. Good luck with everything, not that you'll need it!
I'm so glad you updated! When I saw the alert in my email I was over the moon! :D
This chapter was definitely worth the wait and you left a cliffhanger? Arghh... but I hope you update soon next time. Good luck with everything, not that you'll need it!
11/9/2012 c5 Beta
Hi, I just wanted to remind you that this site has awesome beta readers waiting to edit and read through your stories for mistakes so even if you don't have time to do that yourself you could always ask for a little help from them.
Other than that, the story is going great and I really can't imagine what's in store for Melissa at her house.
Hi, I just wanted to remind you that this site has awesome beta readers waiting to edit and read through your stories for mistakes so even if you don't have time to do that yourself you could always ask for a little help from them.
Other than that, the story is going great and I really can't imagine what's in store for Melissa at her house.
11/6/2012 c5 
2CieloRayn
Great chapter; there were quite a few mistakes though they were minor mistakes nothing big. Forgotten words and some spelling errors. Other than that I liked it ); I can't wait to read more.
2CieloRaynGreat chapter; there were quite a few mistakes though they were minor mistakes nothing big. Forgotten words and some spelling errors. Other than that I liked it ); I can't wait to read more.
11/5/2012 c5 RandomReader
I really love how this is turning out, you're bringing out the characters of your story perfectly and they seem very real. Also, I find Lucy hilarious, especially in this chapter. Update soon... Or when you can!
I really love how this is turning out, you're bringing out the characters of your story perfectly and they seem very real. Also, I find Lucy hilarious, especially in this chapter. Update soon... Or when you can!
11/5/2012 c5 1Alannahcannotdraw
I really like it, but I hope Melissa doesn't like Aaron for too long, because I want her with Justin!:) Please, please, please update soon!
1AlannahcannotdrawI really like it, but I hope Melissa doesn't like Aaron for too long, because I want her with Justin!:) Please, please, please update soon!
11/4/2012 c5 3HalfwayParanoid
Understandable with exams. I go to college, so I can understand the pressure and pain.
There were several grammatical and spelling mistakes on this chapter, but like you said, not enough time.
I do look forward to the next chapter now, since you ended it like you did. Sheesh, well atleast you have us reviewers.
3HalfwayParanoidUnderstandable with exams. I go to college, so I can understand the pressure and pain.
There were several grammatical and spelling mistakes on this chapter, but like you said, not enough time.
I do look forward to the next chapter now, since you ended it like you did. Sheesh, well atleast you have us reviewers.
11/4/2012 c5 Unknown 12345678910
Hey Colly! :D AWESOME chapter! I love this story so much! And I was right this chapter tht took a while is BEASTING AWESOME! ;) Bravo! *claps!* :)
Hey Colly! :D AWESOME chapter! I love this story so much! And I was right this chapter tht took a while is BEASTING AWESOME! ;) Bravo! *claps!* :)