for Twin Fates9/2/2012 c1 
4War1309
I like the story, you have a real tallent for names. I cant realy suggest any changes to the story right now my only advice for you is to reread it your self and see if you want to make any changes.
4War1309I like the story, you have a real tallent for names. I cant realy suggest any changes to the story right now my only advice for you is to reread it your self and see if you want to make any changes.
8/26/2012 c1 First
This is an ...interesting... story so far. Dont really know what to make of it seeing as how its still new-ish? But, I would like to see you continue with it. I think it has some great potential. The intro seems almost like you knew what you wanted to write but didnt know how you wanted to write it.
This is an ...interesting... story so far. Dont really know what to make of it seeing as how its still new-ish? But, I would like to see you continue with it. I think it has some great potential. The intro seems almost like you knew what you wanted to write but didnt know how you wanted to write it.