for Losing the other Half10/4/2012 c2 
2tragicallyamore
so i take it they are staying there? you did a really nice job with this very easy to read no gramatical mistake ;) lol feel bad for those poor girls. i knew someone in a position very similar
2tragicallyamoreso i take it they are staying there? you did a really nice job with this very easy to read no gramatical mistake ;) lol feel bad for those poor girls. i knew someone in a position very similar
8/18/2012 c1 1Jinspire
Such detail. I've been blown away, off to the depths of the Milky Way. ;-; Anywho, yeah... It is wonderfully awesome. But, there was a spelling error here, most likely a typo: "MAya" Otherwise, all is fine. Once again, the chapters could be longer, but since there is such good prose here I'm gonna just shut up and take what I can get.
Nice summary too, imo. Brief and to the point, while explaining the plot in a simple way.
1JinspireSuch detail. I've been blown away, off to the depths of the Milky Way. ;-; Anywho, yeah... It is wonderfully awesome. But, there was a spelling error here, most likely a typo: "MAya" Otherwise, all is fine. Once again, the chapters could be longer, but since there is such good prose here I'm gonna just shut up and take what I can get.
Nice summary too, imo. Brief and to the point, while explaining the plot in a simple way.