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8/24/2012 c1 Taint.Revile.Elude
I cannot believe in the perfect God either, none of what I have been told about him adds up to the world as it is for me. Thus, I enjoyed this.

As for the poem, it instantly made sense to me and I thoroughly identified with its simplistic yet strong reaction to loss.

-Cairo.
8/24/2012 c1 6Ophelia Schmit
For the poem, the message is awesome! It's only going to get worse if you lock yourself up, so go and do something to make you happy. :)

I LOVED your end message! Nobody, not even "God", is perfect. Don't expect "Him" to make it perfect for you. Sorry for the quotation marks, as I'm atheist. :/

-Hermie
8/24/2012 c1 2islandsun
That is really good and very moving.
8/24/2012 c1 19dreamcollector
Wow... Where'd this come from? I like it, but where did this idea come from?

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