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10/8/2012 c1 3AoideMythos
This is kind of sad until the kind-ish... I like this though, but I cannot relate to it.
(MOM LOVE to everyone! XD)
10/8/2012 c1 2Redz
There are so many emotions packed into this.

I really liked the beginning and the end, but I think some verses in the middle could be put together to make longer ones. Good job, anyway! I liked it. My situation is probably not the same as yours, but I could identify. Keep it up :)
10/2/2012 c1 11cool sapc
This is great, Charissa. I understand exactly how you feel. :)
8/30/2012 c1 1ComicGirl18
Woah... this is really good and sad. You're really great at poetry so please keep posting!
8/30/2012 c1 28Romeo Twist
Tragic. It's awesome.
8/29/2012 c1 29Joseph Kiley
Interesting enough content-wise, but I think it could be executed in a more interesting way. Try using metaphors or imagery. Everyone just states what they want to state in poetry nowadays, and it's usually very similar in content. You're gonna have to spice it up a little to be ahead of the curve.

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