for The Kingdom of Hail10/11/2012 c14 fanx2
I love phinn trying to be all manly but Elena can see through him. awkward definitely ensued.
I love phinn trying to be all manly but Elena can see through him. awkward definitely ensued.
10/9/2012 c20 
1lobsterwife
Aw how cute ;A; Seriously I am dying from all of this cuteness uhgjdhd. Also super concerned over Turner and Olivier? LIKE WHERE ARE THEY? That's really awful, and I don't like how they're missing, especially with that whole thing with Hunt and the Others. Hope they're okay :( Everything seemed to be going so smoothly, but I guess SOMETHING bad had to happen.
1lobsterwifeAw how cute ;A; Seriously I am dying from all of this cuteness uhgjdhd. Also super concerned over Turner and Olivier? LIKE WHERE ARE THEY? That's really awful, and I don't like how they're missing, especially with that whole thing with Hunt and the Others. Hope they're okay :( Everything seemed to be going so smoothly, but I guess SOMETHING bad had to happen.
10/2/2012 c17 lobsterwife
Awwww crap. Couldn't expect the fun times to keep going, right? Welp you're still amazing at the action scenes obviously. AND OMGGG EVA? Eva was Turner's mom right? I think so. Oh well. But ahhudhfjd! More mothers coming to terrorize our poor heroes! Hopefully this doesn't turn too ugly :/
Awwww crap. Couldn't expect the fun times to keep going, right? Welp you're still amazing at the action scenes obviously. AND OMGGG EVA? Eva was Turner's mom right? I think so. Oh well. But ahhudhfjd! More mothers coming to terrorize our poor heroes! Hopefully this doesn't turn too ugly :/
9/30/2012 c16 lobsterwife
You're killing me with these chapters, dear dhfjdhjfd. I loved the insight into Phinn and Anya's relationship. Poor Anya :( It makes sense now why she wanted to build up Phinn's immunity to the poison though. She was scared she'd lose him too, but she went about it in such a outlandish way. It's really sad when you think about it. Anya really loves Phinn, and I hope their relationship can be at least sort of mended by the end of the series? And AHHHH LITTLE PHINN. Just kill me wow cutie. Elena getting all excited over the painting killed me haha. She's so interested in getting to know him, and hellbent on getting inside his head, and I love that. I also adore her thing about wanting to be special? Like she wants him to open up to her. She wants to be this supportive person in his life, and she wants him to be comfortable with her and ahfjdhfkdhfd. STOOOOP. I have too many feelings.
You're killing me with these chapters, dear dhfjdhjfd. I loved the insight into Phinn and Anya's relationship. Poor Anya :( It makes sense now why she wanted to build up Phinn's immunity to the poison though. She was scared she'd lose him too, but she went about it in such a outlandish way. It's really sad when you think about it. Anya really loves Phinn, and I hope their relationship can be at least sort of mended by the end of the series? And AHHHH LITTLE PHINN. Just kill me wow cutie. Elena getting all excited over the painting killed me haha. She's so interested in getting to know him, and hellbent on getting inside his head, and I love that. I also adore her thing about wanting to be special? Like she wants him to open up to her. She wants to be this supportive person in his life, and she wants him to be comfortable with her and ahfjdhfkdhfd. STOOOOP. I have too many feelings.
9/28/2012 c14 lobsterwife
Technically you sort of posted this chapter on my birthday (which was the 27th), so I'm considering this as a birthday gift to me haha. SO CUTE. I can't deal with the awkwardness goofy adorableness that is Phinn/Elena. Like wow what dummies haha. I like them when they have this relaxed atmosphere around them. The whole conversation about whether Phinn was cute as a child omfg I bet he was adorable. And then and then and then they almost KISSED WAHHH GARRETT COME ON DUDE. Oh well. This chapter was so fluffy I want to die. Now I assume something awful is going to happen because that's usually how it goes sob.
Technically you sort of posted this chapter on my birthday (which was the 27th), so I'm considering this as a birthday gift to me haha. SO CUTE. I can't deal with the awkwardness goofy adorableness that is Phinn/Elena. Like wow what dummies haha. I like them when they have this relaxed atmosphere around them. The whole conversation about whether Phinn was cute as a child omfg I bet he was adorable. And then and then and then they almost KISSED WAHHH GARRETT COME ON DUDE. Oh well. This chapter was so fluffy I want to die. Now I assume something awful is going to happen because that's usually how it goes sob.
9/27/2012 c14 1thatawkwardmoment
I smiled through the entire chapter :) Seriously, my cheeks are hurting. They are just so cute and adorable, although I feel bad for Lawson and bummed that Elena didn't get to say goodbye to Cole - I love their relationship too.
It's been a while since I reviewed but I do love these stories (this one in particular, because it's so fluffy in parts) and am both happy and jealous that you manage to update so quickly.
Anyway, looking forward to the next update. :)
1thatawkwardmomentI smiled through the entire chapter :) Seriously, my cheeks are hurting. They are just so cute and adorable, although I feel bad for Lawson and bummed that Elena didn't get to say goodbye to Cole - I love their relationship too.
It's been a while since I reviewed but I do love these stories (this one in particular, because it's so fluffy in parts) and am both happy and jealous that you manage to update so quickly.
Anyway, looking forward to the next update. :)
9/27/2012 c14 1Dashita Tichou
OMG! This chapter is so cute! I wish Garret would've walked in just 10 seconds later, that would've been even funnier!
You're doing a really good job making this series funny as heck but at the same time really tense. I absolutely adore how fast you pump these out, I wish I could write that fast and well. Good luck to you on anything else you write and I hope that this series comes to end end nicely, but at the same time I hope it keeps going for a very, very long time.
1Dashita TichouOMG! This chapter is so cute! I wish Garret would've walked in just 10 seconds later, that would've been even funnier!
You're doing a really good job making this series funny as heck but at the same time really tense. I absolutely adore how fast you pump these out, I wish I could write that fast and well. Good luck to you on anything else you write and I hope that this series comes to end end nicely, but at the same time I hope it keeps going for a very, very long time.
9/26/2012 c13 fanx2
wow. Lawson took that like a champ. I hope they can be friends in the end!
wow. Lawson took that like a champ. I hope they can be friends in the end!
9/26/2012 c12 fanx2
nothing to say but good chapter. im sad im almost all caught up.
nothing to say but good chapter. im sad im almost all caught up.
9/26/2012 c11 fanx2
I dont know if Sage and Garrett or Sage and Turner was the cutest thing in this chapter. This whole book so far has been very cute.
I dont know if Sage and Garrett or Sage and Turner was the cutest thing in this chapter. This whole book so far has been very cute.
9/26/2012 c10 fanx2
yay turner! ANd I wish Hayden could go along with them. I miss him.
yay turner! ANd I wish Hayden could go along with them. I miss him.
9/26/2012 c9 fanx2
ahh! garrett is engaged to Sage! thats awesome!
And also phinn! poor kid!
ahh! garrett is engaged to Sage! thats awesome!
And also phinn! poor kid!
9/26/2012 c8 fanx2
if you can rely on phinn for one thing, its that hes going to have a BIG reaction. awesome.
if you can rely on phinn for one thing, its that hes going to have a BIG reaction. awesome.
9/26/2012 c7 fanx2
garrett is real funny. I bet he has some kind of super abilities that hes keeping secret or else he wouldnt have this high position though. didnt get to see much of Irving but hes more serious. and I figured Clinton would be there but if everything goes well with TUrner and then he fixes lawson too, then i can be a fan!
garrett is real funny. I bet he has some kind of super abilities that hes keeping secret or else he wouldnt have this high position though. didnt get to see much of Irving but hes more serious. and I figured Clinton would be there but if everything goes well with TUrner and then he fixes lawson too, then i can be a fan!
9/26/2012 c6 fanx2
yay magic! even though clinton seems like kind of an ass. STrike that REALLY an ass. I get a feeling hes not going to be leaving the story very soon so well all have to get used to him though.
yay magic! even though clinton seems like kind of an ass. STrike that REALLY an ass. I get a feeling hes not going to be leaving the story very soon so well all have to get used to him though.