for Vertigo11/14/2020 c25 
3Colie Rae
I loved this story! It was captivating. I loved the characters and the realness behind their behaviors. Gemma had good growth throughout the story. The sexual tension and sex scenes were well done. I liked that multiple characters showed their vulnerability. The only thing I didn't like was how many times characters talked about their undercover situation or used their real names in open places ie. at the neighbors house where they could have been overheard. The concept of the story and the execution was excellent. Tons of action but all the action further developed the characters into who they became. Amazing work. I like that it didn't wrap up and end in a perfect happy ending.
3Colie RaeI loved this story! It was captivating. I loved the characters and the realness behind their behaviors. Gemma had good growth throughout the story. The sexual tension and sex scenes were well done. I liked that multiple characters showed their vulnerability. The only thing I didn't like was how many times characters talked about their undercover situation or used their real names in open places ie. at the neighbors house where they could have been overheard. The concept of the story and the execution was excellent. Tons of action but all the action further developed the characters into who they became. Amazing work. I like that it didn't wrap up and end in a perfect happy ending.
6/25/2020 c26 Kass
Second time reading though Absolute genius! Good job! 5/5 stars
Second time reading though Absolute genius! Good job! 5/5 stars
12/17/2019 c25 Chasing Sunsets
Oh good lord, I am seriously swooning for Boone... Boone swooning... Booneing... hahaha I’ve lost my mind! I just read this entire story in one sitting and am now completely sleep deprived..
But seriously, I love the story. The plot line is great and the characters are so complex and interesting. I kinda love that Gemma and Boone aren't perfect and are slowly developing as the story moves forward.
This is an awesome work of fiction for so many reasons.. not only because it's so easy to get lost in this world you’ve created but there is also a sense of realism that the characters bring because they're not crazy cliched and the story isn't cheesy. With the ending, it would have been unrealistic for these characters to have ended all happily ever after but instead leaves them having to work on those feelings they've discovered. I'm excited to see where this leads.
I think your writing style is amazing and the way you’ve managed to bring these characters to life is great. You’re super talented and I hope you never stop writing! Can’t wait to read the next one! More Booneing in store for me I’m sure hehe
- S
Ps. I don't usually make time to review but it was so good that I had to. First review I’ve written on here, yay! Just for you :)
Oh good lord, I am seriously swooning for Boone... Boone swooning... Booneing... hahaha I’ve lost my mind! I just read this entire story in one sitting and am now completely sleep deprived..
But seriously, I love the story. The plot line is great and the characters are so complex and interesting. I kinda love that Gemma and Boone aren't perfect and are slowly developing as the story moves forward.
This is an awesome work of fiction for so many reasons.. not only because it's so easy to get lost in this world you’ve created but there is also a sense of realism that the characters bring because they're not crazy cliched and the story isn't cheesy. With the ending, it would have been unrealistic for these characters to have ended all happily ever after but instead leaves them having to work on those feelings they've discovered. I'm excited to see where this leads.
I think your writing style is amazing and the way you’ve managed to bring these characters to life is great. You’re super talented and I hope you never stop writing! Can’t wait to read the next one! More Booneing in store for me I’m sure hehe
- S
Ps. I don't usually make time to review but it was so good that I had to. First review I’ve written on here, yay! Just for you :)
12/3/2019 c26 Guest
Oh this was amazing! Thank you for sharing!
Oh this was amazing! Thank you for sharing!
7/31/2019 c10 DaughterOfDarkness16
I’ve been pounding through these chapters ALL DAY waiting for this! So worth it! Love your writing! And the fight scene was amazing! Fast paced and unpredictable!
I’ve been pounding through these chapters ALL DAY waiting for this! So worth it! Love your writing! And the fight scene was amazing! Fast paced and unpredictable!
11/24/2018 c26 1Du
So. Guess who just reread this wonderful story for the nth time? I can’t help feeling so attached to this story. to Gemma... You have a way with words, the writing in this is so, so good... It will forever be my favourite story (series) on this site. Everything about it is so good: the action scenes and the actual plot itself is amazing, the character development is so well done, and the underlying love story grips at my heart every single time.
Thank you for this, I hope everything is well in your life. Now I’m off to read Ricochet now :)
1DuSo. Guess who just reread this wonderful story for the nth time? I can’t help feeling so attached to this story. to Gemma... You have a way with words, the writing in this is so, so good... It will forever be my favourite story (series) on this site. Everything about it is so good: the action scenes and the actual plot itself is amazing, the character development is so well done, and the underlying love story grips at my heart every single time.
Thank you for this, I hope everything is well in your life. Now I’m off to read Ricochet now :)
4/12/2018 c26 Tan
You are a God. This is gold. Heading over to read the other stuff.
You are a God. This is gold. Heading over to read the other stuff.
12/11/2017 c1 Sinelle
I had this dream the other night about this story and the past few days it's all I've thought about haha so here's me reading this for the 3rd time!
I had this dream the other night about this story and the past few days it's all I've thought about haha so here's me reading this for the 3rd time!
10/12/2017 c1 9The Golden Orchid
This is probably the best story on fictionpress. Impeccable plotline, relatable characters and just the right amount of drama. Love love loved it.
9The Golden OrchidThis is probably the best story on fictionpress. Impeccable plotline, relatable characters and just the right amount of drama. Love love loved it.
8/24/2017 c24 Lovethyneighbor
Type your review here. I just want congratulate you of setting the perfect male leader, meaning that Doone, had plenty opportunity to bed her and she would not have stopped him; he bedded her only after she became single, rare truely are a brilliant writer. Hopefully there will be more of your writing?
Type your review here. I just want congratulate you of setting the perfect male leader, meaning that Doone, had plenty opportunity to bed her and she would not have stopped him; he bedded her only after she became single, rare truely are a brilliant writer. Hopefully there will be more of your writing?
8/24/2017 c5 Lovethyneighbor
Type your review here. Hi there. I would like to bring to mind that the swearing vocabulary of the "Lord JESUS CHRIST" is not fitting; not fitting to any story. I am not vilifying you: just trying to help. There are so many other swearing words to use. He blessed you with a great talent. Other than that; Great .
Type your review here. Hi there. I would like to bring to mind that the swearing vocabulary of the "Lord JESUS CHRIST" is not fitting; not fitting to any story. I am not vilifying you: just trying to help. There are so many other swearing words to use. He blessed you with a great talent. Other than that; Great .
7/31/2017 c18 ForeverDancingInShadows
You are an incredible artist. What a journey this is. I'm constantly taken aback by the details that you include and how you show so much of the characters. Wow.
You are an incredible artist. What a journey this is. I'm constantly taken aback by the details that you include and how you show so much of the characters. Wow.