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1/23/2013 c3 lisa
this is so amazing! boone and gemma are wonderful together.
1/23/2013 c2 lisa
um this is so great. i love gemma!
1/23/2013 c1 lisa
since i loved TDF i thought i'd check this out. so far, i LOVE it
1/22/2013 c1 13JDFly
Hey, you crammed more good STUFF into a chapter 1 than I can handle. I need a day to digest it b4 I read chapter 2 tomorrow night.
JD Fly
1/22/2013 c6 stuck in bed
I liked the first line. Set a sort of light mood for what was later to come. & I liked: "I had a philosophical discussion about last night in my head as I worked the shampoo into my hair about several things" because, seriously, c'mon, everyone thinks about everything in the shower. That was pretty relatable (or at least, I think so...)

Oooh. Lots of Russian names. I thin I remember most of them. & you make Boone and Gemma sound so professional. I really can't help but be amazed in every single chapter by how realistic you manage to be.

I enjoyed seeing Agent Hart again. And Gemma tease Boone, even just a bit, made the situation feel a bit more lighthearted again. And I loved loved loved the interaction between Hart & Gemma. With Gemma sounding firm and polite & Hart simply being condescending. The blind infiltration part in the Farm was amazing and I loved this: "I don't doubt your abilities, Laura, but I'd like to go in with Gemma." He seemed faintly amused when he added, "I'd like to see this blind infiltration record in action."

I liked the more serious atmosphere later, with the implications of them being killed. (But if there's something I've learnt from TV series is that the main character won't die straight away or else there's no point. It helps me relax.) & I loved this line too: "5:57, baby." I put both my hands up and shrugged. "Just saying."

The rest of the chapter was simply lovely and great. I loved reading it and it flowed so well so I don't really have anything to comment. The end of the chapter. GAH. I need more.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)
1/22/2013 c1 Guest
Ugh gibson is such a passive agressive bi tch
1/21/2013 c6 larafrancesca
I'm not liking Gibson so much, but that's the point, right? I am however, looking forward to Tom and Gem falling in love. Their interaction is so sweet :) and I really like Danny, his and Gemma's way of annoying Boone is brilliant! Keep up the wonderful writing, I look forward to more!
1/20/2013 c6 5Grotesque-Beauty-And-Me
Not a cliffhanger! I really don't like agent Gibson, lol. I am quite anxious to see what lies on the other side of the door, I love the interactions between Boone and Gemma.
1/20/2013 c6 The Deadly Sins
I love it so much :) update soon, please!
1/20/2013 c6 1HighOnAirGurl
This reads like a real book it's so amazing. You are such SUCH good author. Update soon!
1/19/2013 c6 4Nyx'sReincarnation
amazing amazing chapter! I think this is my favorite story on FP, not that I don't look forward to all the others or anything. The fact that next chapter has to be separated worries me a bit... or a lot...
I have a question. I haven't written a major action scene yet. Are they generally easier or harder to write than any other scene?
I love that all your stories involve females that aren't week little chumps who need guys to take care of them. We girls are better that way. XD
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
1/19/2013 c6 10cherrypiesizzle
I haven't been on fictionpress in a while, and your story is the only one I follow atm :)
1/19/2013 c6 Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling
*bangs head on keyboard* What...is...it...with you...and cliffhangers?!
I liked the tension between Laura and Gemma. *smirks* And why do I get the feeling Danny ships Thomas/anyone but Laura Gibson?
Lovely chapter and I look forward to getting the action! :)
1/19/2013 c6 1Eve in the garden
Great chapter! Gibson is so irritating but I love how Gemma told her where to go. That cliffhanger has me dying to read the next chapter!
1/19/2013 c6 KrazyFrog100
You never cease to amaze me. You balance everything so well, like moments with Boone and action parts and internal narrative. Already my fave story. Update soon because that was a brutal cliffhanger.
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