
1/7/2022 c16 Dinaharun
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Dina, an editor for a fast growing platform, i would love to give you an offer, may i know how to reach you professionally?
halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Dina, an editor for a fast growing platform, i would love to give you an offer, may i know how to reach you professionally?
5/8/2016 c16 DSPamungkas
I love this story! Will you update it, please? Don't leave us in a cliffhanger :(
I love this story! Will you update it, please? Don't leave us in a cliffhanger :(
6/3/2015 c16 theavidreader333
awesome awesome awesome just awesome! your really good at describing the characters and I like how you have used a different language in the text to describe relationships etc. e.g. "malinkaya", It really hooks your readers in! like I said before good job and keep at it you have a really interesting story on your hands!.
awesome awesome awesome just awesome! your really good at describing the characters and I like how you have used a different language in the text to describe relationships etc. e.g. "malinkaya", It really hooks your readers in! like I said before good job and keep at it you have a really interesting story on your hands!.
1/19/2015 c16 smrae
Well done chapter! Alek and Madeline talking seems to be working wonders on their relationship lol. I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work :) you got this!
Well done chapter! Alek and Madeline talking seems to be working wonders on their relationship lol. I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work :) you got this!
1/15/2015 c5 Anon
Just finished chap 5 and, sorry to say, but I kind of hope Madeleine hooks up with Nate...
Just finished chap 5 and, sorry to say, but I kind of hope Madeleine hooks up with Nate...
11/7/2014 c15 zaini
update quick! pretty please...
this did nothing to quench the thirst for the story to get movin.
update quick! pretty please...
this did nothing to quench the thirst for the story to get movin.
7/22/2014 c14 A
Really like this story! I hope you can update soon. Don't leave us hanging in such anticipation!
Really like this story! I hope you can update soon. Don't leave us hanging in such anticipation!
7/7/2014 c14 smrae
Hi! So I'm sorry it took me so long to review! First things first I'm so glad you updated. I hope you update soon because I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next for Madeline. She is in a vulnerable place and with the entrance of who ever is at the door I'm sure she is going to be even more shook up. Looking forward to the update!
Hi! So I'm sorry it took me so long to review! First things first I'm so glad you updated. I hope you update soon because I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next for Madeline. She is in a vulnerable place and with the entrance of who ever is at the door I'm sure she is going to be even more shook up. Looking forward to the update!
2/22/2014 c1 dmarier
Its been over two months since you've updated and I get that life gets in the way sometimes but I loveee your story! And I want to know what happens between the two love birds! Hurry back!
Its been over two months since you've updated and I get that life gets in the way sometimes but I loveee your story! And I want to know what happens between the two love birds! Hurry back!
12/2/2013 c13
2littlelil1991
This is a great story and I can't wait to see what will happen for Alek and Madeline. The plot so far seems interesting since there are basically two things that have to be worked on and figured out. Can't wait to read more!

This is a great story and I can't wait to see what will happen for Alek and Madeline. The plot so far seems interesting since there are basically two things that have to be worked on and figured out. Can't wait to read more!
11/29/2013 c13 Guest
I'm so glad you're back and I can't wait for the next update! Alek has to fix things with Madeline.
I'm so glad you're back and I can't wait for the next update! Alek has to fix things with Madeline.
11/27/2013 c13 Mintfrost291
Awesome Chapter! So excited that you updated again! :D Can't wait for the next one!
Awesome Chapter! So excited that you updated again! :D Can't wait for the next one!