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10/3/2006 c1 4autumnmurder
Gorgeous.
10/3/2006 c1 67morbid-fantasies
Brava. Simply lovely.
3/9/2006 c1 Friggin Awesome
That was...wow.
1/28/2006 c1 35Auster2
i am perplexed, the poem gives off so much love, and mystery, but your last two lines and the mentioning of her name...i don know. but anyway very beautiful poem.
8/15/2005 c1 Z.Z. Villa
That's one of the greatest poems I've ever read.
4/23/2003 c1 8Mishapen Adonis
This is a very traditional poem, with archaic syntax in parts. I would suggest a more traditional metre. Without the rhythm scheme, the swiched verb and noun arrangements are unnecissary and, in my opinion, detract from the effect of the poem. Besides that minor distraction, I enjoyed it very much.
9/9/2001 c1 Chibi-chan desu
o.O was that irl? if it was...*cries* that's soooo sad! *sniffles and wipes a tear* and this is Usa...~_~ don't click my profile unless u wanna die...- -; But that was a great poem! *wink*
6/5/2001 c1 6Eternally Skye
Noooooo, she couldn't have! This was really sweet though... I hope it's not a true story, that would be awful... Anyway, the only suggestion I have to make is the past/present tense mistakes. But other than that, sad sad sad...

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