for Taking Risks8/12/2017 c2 kkk
hi Brit,ur first chapter was quite cool.i don't have a tumblr account, so...yeah. Maybe u can email me or something.I would love to be ur friend.. :)
This is my email address:
or gmail:
pls pls pls email me
hi Brit,ur first chapter was quite cool.i don't have a tumblr account, so...yeah. Maybe u can email me or something.I would love to be ur friend.. :)
This is my email address:
or gmail:
pls pls pls email me
5/22/2014 c2 
4cumberbarbie
so i just wanted to reiterate how much you suck for taking this down and not finishing it. ily. but you suck. bye.
4cumberbarbieso i just wanted to reiterate how much you suck for taking this down and not finishing it. ily. but you suck. bye.
12/1/2013 c2 3TheClosetWriter16
Wow. I think I may cry. I actually loved this story (as you could probably tell from my reviews haha). And when I saw this 'new chapter' I FREAKED out. Thanks for writing it... I enjoyed it while it lasted...
Please, please, please continue. I mean, I don't want to beg but PLEASE c:
bye :(
3TheClosetWriter16Wow. I think I may cry. I actually loved this story (as you could probably tell from my reviews haha). And when I saw this 'new chapter' I FREAKED out. Thanks for writing it... I enjoyed it while it lasted...
Please, please, please continue. I mean, I don't want to beg but PLEASE c:
bye :(
11/29/2013 c2 RuthEvelyn
I see where you're coming from, I just really wish you would have continued the story, in my opinion, it wasn't crappy at all, it was actually probably my favorite story on fictionpress...
A Very Sad LivesToRead
I see where you're coming from, I just really wish you would have continued the story, in my opinion, it wasn't crappy at all, it was actually probably my favorite story on fictionpress...
A Very Sad LivesToRead
11/29/2013 c1 heal me forever
Hi there Shucks : I saw the email that stry is updated nd i rush here ( I am no longer active here).And BAM! its not an update but this ! i shuld i saved the copy :P I do that but I do dat for finished books u know? I thought I will do after completion of the stry BUT...ALAS!
hope someday U will feel urself to write this up dat Day ...I am waiting Will be waiting
-Nick&Lex FAN :) They R "Irrestiable Tempatation"
-Hope U have an amazing Life Ahead :)
Hi there Shucks : I saw the email that stry is updated nd i rush here ( I am no longer active here).And BAM! its not an update but this ! i shuld i saved the copy :P I do that but I do dat for finished books u know? I thought I will do after completion of the stry BUT...ALAS!
hope someday U will feel urself to write this up dat Day ...I am waiting Will be waiting
-Nick&Lex FAN :) They R "Irrestiable Tempatation"
-Hope U have an amazing Life Ahead :)
11/29/2013 c2 2Marguerite Grimmett
Aww... I feel really sorry I didn't read all of it. I haven't finished it yet, but the first chapter was SO GOOD. Sad you had to take it down, but wonderful story overall. :)
2Marguerite GrimmettAww... I feel really sorry I didn't read all of it. I haven't finished it yet, but the first chapter was SO GOOD. Sad you had to take it down, but wonderful story overall. :)
11/15/2013 c10 Lanie
Hey! I know you haven't updated this since April, but I really think you should continue writing this story. The characters are good and the plot is interesting (:
Hey! I know you haven't updated this since April, but I really think you should continue writing this story. The characters are good and the plot is interesting (:
11/4/2013 c10 FRICKIN LYDIA
wow wow why do you do this
do you enjoy causing me pain
doYOU
ugh pls write more pls
like u can't just leave it like that
really brittney
REALLY
u will be shunned from me until u write more hehehehehehehehe
wow wow why do you do this
do you enjoy causing me pain
doYOU
ugh pls write more pls
like u can't just leave it like that
really brittney
REALLY
u will be shunned from me until u write more hehehehehehehehe
11/4/2013 c7 LYDIA
IF YOU DON'T KEEP WRITING MORE I'LL CRY
IF YOU DON'T KEEP WRITING MORE I'LL CRY
8/5/2013 c10 awesome
dude ur story is so awesome i love itttttttt
dude ur story is so awesome i love itttttttt
5/8/2013 c2 4whatthegreencarrot
[Even though thats what you do to everyone else all day?"] Guess what's wrong? I think it was a typo, seeing as you've been amazing with apostrophes as of now, so I thought I'd drop that in so you could fix it.
[He said it in a suggestive way, and I felt like smacking him. Or kissing him.] That was sudden. Second chapter, girl's already interested in kissing him? Surprising. This is moving pretty fast, isn't it?
[Until he put his hand on my leg and started slowly running it up the length of my thigh.] No mistake, but I just had to comment. LOL, seriously? He moves quickly, I'll give him that. I find it a little hard to believe that any actual guy would do that to a girl he barely knows; Stacie already said that she'd reject him, and guys hate rejection. They wouldn't do that because they'd be afraid of being slapped away, even if said guy was a playboy. The playboy would woo her, yeah, but he wouldn't start groping her after five minutes of being acquaintances.
[He looked pointedly at the paper and rolled his eyes. "But that isn't necessary, seeing as you know all of this already." He looked] I know I'm being picky here, but you used "he looked" to start a sentence twice, in less than a paragraph. I know, I know, I'm being picky as hell. Sorry :3
They're...making a bet that they can fall in love with each other? Love is a pretty unpredictable thing, so I would've expected something along the lines of "I bet you'll sleep with me by the end of the month" or something. I find it kind of unlikely; imagine your scenario in real life (that's what I always do). Put yourself in Alexis's place and think about it. Would you bet that the most wanted guy in school would fall in love with you?
I don't really think there's someone who'll make you feel amazing, not when you barely know them, and not when you don't have feelings for them. Sure, he or she could be a great kisser, but the way that you were describing Nick's feelings—I don't think he was stunned because she was good at tonsil hockey.
I'm sorry, I analyze things a lot, and I know that this is your first story. If I come off as too aggressive, just tell me. But I always think, Is this possible? Do you think that anyone would actually do this, and move so quickly?
4whatthegreencarrot[Even though thats what you do to everyone else all day?"] Guess what's wrong? I think it was a typo, seeing as you've been amazing with apostrophes as of now, so I thought I'd drop that in so you could fix it.
[He said it in a suggestive way, and I felt like smacking him. Or kissing him.] That was sudden. Second chapter, girl's already interested in kissing him? Surprising. This is moving pretty fast, isn't it?
[Until he put his hand on my leg and started slowly running it up the length of my thigh.] No mistake, but I just had to comment. LOL, seriously? He moves quickly, I'll give him that. I find it a little hard to believe that any actual guy would do that to a girl he barely knows; Stacie already said that she'd reject him, and guys hate rejection. They wouldn't do that because they'd be afraid of being slapped away, even if said guy was a playboy. The playboy would woo her, yeah, but he wouldn't start groping her after five minutes of being acquaintances.
[He looked pointedly at the paper and rolled his eyes. "But that isn't necessary, seeing as you know all of this already." He looked] I know I'm being picky here, but you used "he looked" to start a sentence twice, in less than a paragraph. I know, I know, I'm being picky as hell. Sorry :3
They're...making a bet that they can fall in love with each other? Love is a pretty unpredictable thing, so I would've expected something along the lines of "I bet you'll sleep with me by the end of the month" or something. I find it kind of unlikely; imagine your scenario in real life (that's what I always do). Put yourself in Alexis's place and think about it. Would you bet that the most wanted guy in school would fall in love with you?
I don't really think there's someone who'll make you feel amazing, not when you barely know them, and not when you don't have feelings for them. Sure, he or she could be a great kisser, but the way that you were describing Nick's feelings—I don't think he was stunned because she was good at tonsil hockey.
I'm sorry, I analyze things a lot, and I know that this is your first story. If I come off as too aggressive, just tell me. But I always think, Is this possible? Do you think that anyone would actually do this, and move so quickly?