for So, How's It Going Ta' Be?5/26/2013 c14 
5HopelessGenius
Alright I really like this story and all but I found the ending scene a bit unrealistic. He breaks up with her (or so she things) and then he comes back and wham! She's allowing him to kiss her and take her to the dance without even explaining himself? I doubt that would really happen in real life. But other than that I liked the chapter :)
5HopelessGeniusAlright I really like this story and all but I found the ending scene a bit unrealistic. He breaks up with her (or so she things) and then he comes back and wham! She's allowing him to kiss her and take her to the dance without even explaining himself? I doubt that would really happen in real life. But other than that I liked the chapter :)
3/30/2013 c9 Guest
How weak you made her is irritating. She turned into this sniveling weakling because of something that happened before she dated him.
How weak you made her is irritating. She turned into this sniveling weakling because of something that happened before she dated him.
2/19/2013 c10 1xXMissMcKaylaXx
I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for more! :) keep up the great work!
1xXMissMcKaylaXxI absolutely love this story! Can't wait for more! :) keep up the great work!
2/17/2013 c10 6Carmel March
I was so glad to see this update! Wonderful chapter, absolutely adorable scenes. I especially liked learning about his parents. I can't wait for more :)
6Carmel MarchI was so glad to see this update! Wonderful chapter, absolutely adorable scenes. I especially liked learning about his parents. I can't wait for more :)
2/15/2013 c10 LiveLoveRead95
Okay so i was just looking for a good story when i stopped by this and it was an awesome decision. I could not finish once i started, it is just so good. Cant wait for the update :3
Okay so i was just looking for a good story when i stopped by this and it was an awesome decision. I could not finish once i started, it is just so good. Cant wait for the update :3
12/16/2012 c9 Carmel March
Brilliant. I absolutely adored this chapter. Very well-written! Update soon!
Brilliant. I absolutely adored this chapter. Very well-written! Update soon!
11/21/2012 c8 Carmel March
Sorry for such a late review! Amazing job on this chapter. I'm loving how this is progressing. Update soon!
Sorry for such a late review! Amazing job on this chapter. I'm loving how this is progressing. Update soon!
11/13/2012 c8 3IAmAnAeroplane
OH NO! THere's no more! MORE MORE MORE! I am starving for more! pLeaseeeeeeeeee
3IAmAnAeroplaneOH NO! THere's no more! MORE MORE MORE! I am starving for more! pLeaseeeeeeeeee
11/11/2012 c8 Kayleigh1234
Loved these past few chapters and I'm looking forward to reading what's to come next :)
Loved these past few chapters and I'm looking forward to reading what's to come next :)
10/14/2012 c7 1Georgette4
LOL Depressing is not such a bad thing if the emotion leads you where you need to go to understand the story. As for the length, some of my chapters are 6-8 thousand words long. I know it's hard to end because you have to pick up the same thought in the beginning of the next chapter.
I enjoy your writing, this time I will say this. I felt as though a couple of places was "rushed." I don't know how to explain that other than to say rushed as in you're anxious to get the chapter done so you rush and forget important facts or information. (shrug) I could be wrong, who knows. LOL
You know your story is good when the person who has received notification that a new chapter was posted, immediately goes to the chapter and reads it.
Great job, keep up the good work.
Georgette
1Georgette4LOL Depressing is not such a bad thing if the emotion leads you where you need to go to understand the story. As for the length, some of my chapters are 6-8 thousand words long. I know it's hard to end because you have to pick up the same thought in the beginning of the next chapter.
I enjoy your writing, this time I will say this. I felt as though a couple of places was "rushed." I don't know how to explain that other than to say rushed as in you're anxious to get the chapter done so you rush and forget important facts or information. (shrug) I could be wrong, who knows. LOL
You know your story is good when the person who has received notification that a new chapter was posted, immediately goes to the chapter and reads it.
Great job, keep up the good work.
Georgette
10/11/2012 c6 Georgette4
I thoroughly enjoyed the story and I think you should finish it. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Maybe expand a bit on Ana's background, her age, etc. And also Darrens background...maybe give the story a cliffhanger (as to what happened to his parents), how they died, drugs, alcohol, killed by drug lords, etc. LOL
Georgette
I thoroughly enjoyed the story and I think you should finish it. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Maybe expand a bit on Ana's background, her age, etc. And also Darrens background...maybe give the story a cliffhanger (as to what happened to his parents), how they died, drugs, alcohol, killed by drug lords, etc. LOL
Georgette