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11/26/2012 c11 7Dingo Vision
Whoa. I thought that maybe they (Clive and Lily) would've been able to have Flow realize how stupid she was being. But no...
Safire is actually growing on me... Maybe she will be my favorite by the end. So yeah.
11/20/2012 c11 9CharissaKarn
:D YEEEEEEEEEE! :D this is awesome! totally unexpected! :D i love it! :D thank you! :D
11/5/2012 c10 CharissaKarn
YAY! WOOT WOOT (just for you) lol I LOVE IT! although i feel like slapping Lily a bit, I do want her to get better! ahaha I feel a bit bad for Clive.. lol still awesome chapter! :D CANNOT WAIT to read more! :D
10/31/2012 c1 5CrossesOfTime609
cool concept of Wielding haha I like it :)
10/27/2012 c9 7Dingo Vision
*flail* You can't just do this to me! You're being really mean, especially when I'm about to post the random influx of chapters of MHSW. You better have this chapter finished by Tuesday, since that's my birthday.

Current mood: : at your story.
10/25/2012 c9 9CharissaKarn
:D YEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :D yes, i am hooked! :D ahahaha way too addicted! :D lol cant wait to read more! :D
10/23/2012 c8 7Dingo Vision
Gimme more of this story! Please! I love it to death! Your stories are awesomesauce! You can't possibly be a Human. ...Maybe you're a Dragon!
10/16/2012 c8 Nightly Vigilant
My favorite word in this chappie?

Yeperdidooda.

It's so beautiful! oAo

And Safire's backstory...SALTY TEARS OF SADNESS! D:

"But the question is, is it mere coincidence?"

Me: NOPE. :D

I CAN'T SAY ONWARD IN THIS CHAPPIE! ASDFGHJKLLKGDBJFMDJFGNJFITDH JTGJJJJpieJJJJNDJIDNXUGDHJND CJIHNVJIDNVUINFGINFGIUNVHIRG NVINRGUIVNRIUGNVINRGHNVKRGNV HINGRIHVNRIGNVHIRGHIVNIRGHNV IURGN.

I'm over it. :D

I'm saying it anyway. ONWARD! BU
10/16/2012 c7 Nightly Vigilant
Okay, so my most favorite word in this chappie is 'manilla'.

Manillamanillamanillamanilla manillamanillamanillavanilla manillamanilla

o3o

ANYWHO, the suspense is killing me. WHAT IN THE LIVING DEATH IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO FLOW?!

Well, to find out, I suppose I'll just have to go ONWARD! BU
10/16/2012 c6 Nightly Vigilant
O.O

...

Idontevenknowwhattosayrightn ow

Just that... Holy freaking crap. I knew it. I KNEW it.

THANK GOD I DIDN'T TRUST ANYONE. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

I WIN. BU

Epic chappie, now ONWARD! BU
10/16/2012 c5 Nightly Vigilant
Awesome chapter! :3

So as of now, bounty hunter guy, (let's just call him BHG) is my favorite character. Next would be Lily, and then Flow. owo

And now, I must rant.

HOW ON EARTH HAVE THEY NOT NOTICED THE BHG YET?! ASDFGHJJKLLJHHDNIRCNJFBEJ

Lol, so yeah, ONWARD! BU
10/15/2012 c8 9CharissaKarn
:D YEEEEEEE I LOVE IT! :D I LOVE IT! :D ahaha I love how Safire tells Flow pretty much everything! :) looking forward to reading more! :D so very happy! :D
10/15/2012 c4 Nightly Vigilant
Oh the irony. Oh the beautiful irony.

Safire. Change around the letters and it's Sapphire. As in the gemstone that's used to signify water. XD

All of the unexpectedness in this chappie is brilliant. I NEVER would have foreseen Clive being able to turn invisible.

I have to go, but I'll keep reviewing tomorrow! :D
10/15/2012 c3 Nightly Vigilant
Lol, the moment I saw that the room was already reserved for them, I was like:

"Oh god, bounty hunter guy reserved it didn't he?"

This chappie is awesome.

Oh, as a side note, I DON'T TRUST ANYONE BESIDES LILY AND FLOW. NOT EVEN THE GUY WHO CHECKED THEM IN.

EVERYONE IS A SUSPECT. BU
10/15/2012 c2 Nightly Vigilant
And thus, the conflict is born with the appearance of a Bounty hunter guy!

Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes.

Gosh, if I were Flow, you know what I would do if I had to meet in epic battle with him?

Well, your body is like, 70% WATER.

WATER. THAT I COULD FREEZE.

AND GIVE HIM A NEW MEANING TO THE WORD 'BRAINFREEZE'. o3o

Oh! And I also like the appearance of the Lily straggler. XD

Lol, yeah. So I really like this chappie. A lot.

So yep.


ONWARD! owo


P.S. Sorry if I seem hyper to you, I just...I dunno. I'm hyper on air or something. XP
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