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1/11/2014 c1 Dreaminglight
Those two are so cute! I can not believe how ling it took for Kelly to start liking him! He's been crushing on her for years !

I was so happy ti find out you had wrote more about them in the Four years later section of the story. Most authors would have finished the story at the end of their confession to each other. So for writing their story later on, I thank you profusely for that !
7/18/2013 c1 1ThisLoveThisHate14
I think I have a toothache . . .from all the sweetness!
7/15/2013 c1 1janice246810
Wow this story had smiling and crying at the same time! It was amazing, good job! P. had a few typos:)
6/20/2013 c1 1SecondsTillWakingHour
This is shaping to be a really good book!
5/26/2013 c1 pillowpandabear994
they're so cute together
4/21/2013 c1 ARulzz
4/16/2013 c1 4Lolitroy
Hmm... what can I say?

The opening was lighthearted (I always start criticizing/praising the beginning because I find it very important) and to tell the truth, drew me in. How you described them and their personalities really makes people wanna read more. At least, me.

As for the characters, Daniel is adorable. I really like him. And the Kelly's also adorable. That's a key thing when writing :D

It was sort of their life story. Awesome! They got (spoiler ahead) engaged! Yaaaaaay!

See? You got me fangirling. Awesome story. Sweet, lighthearted and awesome. I really liked it!
3/13/2013 c1 RubyRed22
Wow, I didn't even have to look at the author to have known you wrote this. I actually got here because it was on someone else's favourite list. It's a massive plus because I like you, though ;)

My favourite parts of the story, which also made me laugh out loud: when Dan is simply just like, "Heh." and just when I thought it wouldn't get any better...she faints. She fucking faints. lmfao. I should sue you for the medical bill of the extreme pain in my sides. Oh yeah, and I just about died when Dan said, "You're not responding to my advances, Kelly." I don't even know why this made me laugh so hard. ...Wait- I don't even get medical bills. I live in that cold place above you, so... Yeah, off topic.

I can seriously see all your signature wit shine through Kelly and it made me want to chuckle endlessly. This back and forth in their heads was surely amusing. Talk about "how to lose friends and alienate people" much? Which Kelly does just fabulously, btw. Reminds me of Leigh in all her eccentric, slightly erratic - and not to mention prideful - glory! And you were not kidding when you said Kelly is horrible at math! Or maybe that's just you, because when Dan said 99.9% of couples don't make it past high school, she said he would be that 1%. 100-99.91? Awks.

...gwarsh. I try to give my usual soul-crushing critism and I can't even be serious with you. I'VE BEEN INFECTED. Anyways, another job well done. Flawless in terms of spelling and grammar; it makes me so...damn...proud!... *sheds tears* But in all seriousness, if there were any mistakes, I didn't catch them because I was distracted from the SHEER AWESOMENESS of this story. HA, "in all seriousness"... I can't imagine saying that sentence with a straight face.

On a completely unrelated note, my iPad totally wanted to autocorrect "gwarsh" into "gearshift". -_- Like wtf. Has it NOT met Goofy?! Great, I've now resorted to talking about cartoon characters because I don't even know if you'd have read up to this point, which also happens to be the exact point of where me giving a shit about what I say ends. :) If you have indeed read my whole long-ass review though, I am delighted to say that you are fucking awesome. Times six.
2/20/2013 c1 rebecca schultz
Heart it!
2/17/2013 c1 Breaking Sad
Ahaha so cute! I love your skill with writing! :D
12/30/2012 c1 Rebecca
I like it! Warm and fuzzy- my kind of thing
12/29/2012 c1 11JustStrangeMe
Wow, I will never look at twix bars the same again.
12/28/2012 c1 frigginpinkunicorns
Dear god, that had to be one of the longest oneshots I've ever had the fortune to read. I did once read a oneshot with 26k words, however, so it's not quite at the top of the list. Excellent nonetheless, though.

Aww, I wish you'd do a oneshot of the wedding. It wouldn't be the same, though, I guess, so I'm supposing that it won't happen.

That was an excellent read; it was the nice, laugh-out-loud funny, but the emotions were portrayed quite well, too. Pat yourself on the back; I loved it.
12/23/2012 c1 9Incandescently Chelsea
Oh, my God! I absoutely love it! I had almsot given up on finding a good story, and now you have just rekindled that hope in me!

I loved the humor and the wit! Both Kelly and Daniel were so witty(...most of the time)! And all of the scathingly sarcastic inner thoughts we got to read...pure genious! Love, love, love!

Great job, fabulous writing, beautiful piece of work! Bravo!

Chelsea Elizabeth
12/21/2012 c1 1BrigadierNinja
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