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9/23/2012 c1 6Ophelia Schmit
You know when somebody tells someone to lay off the f-bombs? This is how I think your period usage is: like an f-bomb. Excuse the rudeness of my comment, but I had to use something similar. It's not a bad story, it's great, it's just that you could make your sentences longer.


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