
10/9/2012 c2
1Lizzie'sFanFictions
I thought it was good! I loved it except I wish Marc hadn't kissed her so soon...couldv'e saved it for during the vacation?

I thought it was good! I loved it except I wish Marc hadn't kissed her so soon...couldv'e saved it for during the vacation?
10/9/2012 c2
6Cazie
That was awesome! :D U need to update soon, this story was so funny. I realky liked the end, it was great. I cant wait to see what the next chapter is about!

That was awesome! :D U need to update soon, this story was so funny. I realky liked the end, it was great. I cant wait to see what the next chapter is about!
9/29/2012 c1 Starsis
please do continue!
please do continue!
9/24/2012 c1
4whatthegreencarrot
[was a wreck... Maybe I shouldn't have punched him... I thought.] you missed the "I" at the beginning of the sentence.
Mm, I kind of like it as a oneshot. Short and simple. But it's up to you.

[was a wreck... Maybe I shouldn't have punched him... I thought.] you missed the "I" at the beginning of the sentence.
Mm, I kind of like it as a oneshot. Short and simple. But it's up to you.
9/24/2012 c1 Guest
continue!
continue!