for I don't break the rules10/6/2012 c9 Midnights Scream
awh. this is so sad, I wants it to get happy. they all need to heal each other! great job!
awh. this is so sad, I wants it to get happy. they all need to heal each other! great job!
10/6/2012 c8 Midnights Scream
awh. poor guy. Myka just gets the shitty end of the deal. and damn are those some prices for their powers
awh. poor guy. Myka just gets the shitty end of the deal. and damn are those some prices for their powers
10/6/2012 c2 Midnights Scream
An interesting story. It's not really going at all where I expected it to at first, but I shall continue to read and see where this goes
An interesting story. It's not really going at all where I expected it to at first, but I shall continue to read and see where this goes
9/30/2012 c4 
2Redz
"I succumbed. leaving my clothes on a rock in a neat pile." - Yeah, I'm sure you can tell where the mistake is.
Nice chapter!
2Redz"I succumbed. leaving my clothes on a rock in a neat pile." - Yeah, I'm sure you can tell where the mistake is.
Nice chapter!
9/30/2012 c1 Redz
Cool, cool, cool! I'm definitely reading this! It's so well-written, much better than so many fantasy stories out there!
(From now on, if I spot any mistakes, I'll point them out. It's what I do with stories I like, to make them better. Hope you won't be offended.)
Cool, cool, cool! I'm definitely reading this! It's so well-written, much better than so many fantasy stories out there!
(From now on, if I spot any mistakes, I'll point them out. It's what I do with stories I like, to make them better. Hope you won't be offended.)
9/27/2012 c3 Guest
I think T is an ok rating for this story... so far. But Eryk is such a crybaby.
I think T is an ok rating for this story... so far. But Eryk is such a crybaby.