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10/14/2012 c1 19Anihyr Moonstar
I like the imagery of this. It presents the image of a sad, beaten friend, but also of re-making and mending. The mood is nice too. Despite the inevitability of eventual entropy beyond repair, there's still that struggle to make 'em last a little while longer.

- Moonstar, Review Courtesy of the Review Game’s Review Marathon! (Link in my profile.)
10/6/2012 c1 6Ophelia Schmit
Nice poem, but haikus usually have an element of nature in it.

-Hermie

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