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16saamf 44I liked the last six or so lines the best; they flowed and were easy to understand. I had to read the first half more than once to understand it. If being vague was your intent (as it is with some poems), then success!:P
10/15/2012 c1 45Onearmwonder21Amazing poetry it is as if written by the ancients themselves.
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