for Life Just Got Complicated12/5/2014 c26 27058
Luved the story. Well written. Felt a bit rushed with the ending. She forgives him too quickly. However that aside I really enjoyed this book :)
Luved the story. Well written. Felt a bit rushed with the ending. She forgives him too quickly. However that aside I really enjoyed this book :)
8/13/2014 c26 
3shy green rock
This was good.
I don't know how I feel about the ending. It felt a bit rushed. I mean she finds this out and forgives them the next day...?
Overall, I enjoyed your story though. Anais made me laugh with all her crazy thought...well you made me laugh with all her crazy thoughts lol
3shy green rockThis was good.
I don't know how I feel about the ending. It felt a bit rushed. I mean she finds this out and forgives them the next day...?
Overall, I enjoyed your story though. Anais made me laugh with all her crazy thought...well you made me laugh with all her crazy thoughts lol
8/6/2014 c26 2EllySky
Aww What a nice ending. Fantastic story xxxxxxxxxxxxxx a million kisses and great reviews for you!
2EllySkyAww What a nice ending. Fantastic story xxxxxxxxxxxxxx a million kisses and great reviews for you!
7/18/2014 c26 Grespitchied
The beginning of this story was a but confusing because the characters didn't seem to have a solid identity. Ana was not just undecided ewith Seth but her motives were out of nowhere. I wasn't expecting to read through but I finished and it was a real cute story. It's a very simple written piece so it was a really light and sweet read. The mystery behind it made a lot of sense actually,I was surprised wi that.
The beginning of this story was a but confusing because the characters didn't seem to have a solid identity. Ana was not just undecided ewith Seth but her motives were out of nowhere. I wasn't expecting to read through but I finished and it was a real cute story. It's a very simple written piece so it was a really light and sweet read. The mystery behind it made a lot of sense actually,I was surprised wi that.
7/15/2014 c26 lina.07
Wow. Just wow. That was the most perfect ending! When I was reading the chapters before the truth was out about chelsea, I was like, "ok, this chick is probably dead and mason probably had something to do with her death" and DANG. When the truth was finally out I was like "ohhhh, I was sort of right!" But I hadn't expected Aden to be her brother or the complicated relationship between sethe and mason and chelsea. I was like OMG WAT IS GOING ON! Haha
But MAN, that was really and emotional scene when Mason told Anais the truth. Ouch gurl! So sadddd.
But man, that ending...it was so perfect! I really enjoyed this story! And I'm sad that I finished but I am so happy for the sequal about cassee! Whoop whoop
I literally read this story in like a day in a half. (I kinda stayed up l8 reading it) every single chapter was sooooo goood! I like how the dialogue was something a teenager would say since, well, I am one! Haha
Soooo, once again I really really enjoyed reading this story and its for sure one of my favorites on fiction press :)
Wow. Just wow. That was the most perfect ending! When I was reading the chapters before the truth was out about chelsea, I was like, "ok, this chick is probably dead and mason probably had something to do with her death" and DANG. When the truth was finally out I was like "ohhhh, I was sort of right!" But I hadn't expected Aden to be her brother or the complicated relationship between sethe and mason and chelsea. I was like OMG WAT IS GOING ON! Haha
But MAN, that was really and emotional scene when Mason told Anais the truth. Ouch gurl! So sadddd.
But man, that ending...it was so perfect! I really enjoyed this story! And I'm sad that I finished but I am so happy for the sequal about cassee! Whoop whoop
I literally read this story in like a day in a half. (I kinda stayed up l8 reading it) every single chapter was sooooo goood! I like how the dialogue was something a teenager would say since, well, I am one! Haha
Soooo, once again I really really enjoyed reading this story and its for sure one of my favorites on fiction press :)
7/14/2014 c1 5Juliet Scar
ERMERGAWD if this had the rate T it'd have like a billion more reviews THIS WAS SO GOOD! Keep up the good work! YOURE GRAMMAR IS ON POINT. You deserve 1000 reviews!
5Juliet ScarERMERGAWD if this had the rate T it'd have like a billion more reviews THIS WAS SO GOOD! Keep up the good work! YOURE GRAMMAR IS ON POINT. You deserve 1000 reviews!
7/13/2014 c2 69Shadowswept
Another good chapter. She's starting to get to know the gang, and Tanner is so much fun! I like how you're building the tension with Seth. I've always liked the love/hate kind of stories with lots of drama. This all feels natural and realistic. You've got a talent for portraying the playful, back and forth of teenage personalities, and also the mood swings. We're learning more about Ana too as the story progresses.
69ShadowsweptAnother good chapter. She's starting to get to know the gang, and Tanner is so much fun! I like how you're building the tension with Seth. I've always liked the love/hate kind of stories with lots of drama. This all feels natural and realistic. You've got a talent for portraying the playful, back and forth of teenage personalities, and also the mood swings. We're learning more about Ana too as the story progresses.
7/13/2014 c26 Guest
oww.. chelsea would have been a great character alive
oww.. chelsea would have been a great character alive
7/6/2014 c1 Shadowswept
Great start to the story! I thought the love interest was going to be Tanner, but now there's the twist with the intriguing Seth. I love the cold, distant guy that gets drawn in by the heroine. The first person point of view makes the reader feel what the main character feels, and you've done a terrific job of expressing all her emotions. Love the cool, exotic name Anais! It's fun how she immediately got swept up into the popular group. Cassee seems pretty cool and nice. Also, your dialogue is natural and well-written. People talk the way they actually do in real life. So glad there are lots of chapters already for me to read! I won't have to wait to find out what happens.
Great start to the story! I thought the love interest was going to be Tanner, but now there's the twist with the intriguing Seth. I love the cold, distant guy that gets drawn in by the heroine. The first person point of view makes the reader feel what the main character feels, and you've done a terrific job of expressing all her emotions. Love the cool, exotic name Anais! It's fun how she immediately got swept up into the popular group. Cassee seems pretty cool and nice. Also, your dialogue is natural and well-written. People talk the way they actually do in real life. So glad there are lots of chapters already for me to read! I won't have to wait to find out what happens.
5/14/2014 c22 Guest
CHELSEA? ChElSeA?! WHO IS CHELSEA
AND CAROLINE
UPDATE PLEASE!
CHELSEA? ChElSeA?! WHO IS CHELSEA
AND CAROLINE
UPDATE PLEASE!
3/2/2014 c22 ToLoveIsToDestroy
This is just perfection. I can't even make sentences right now. Please update soon. D:
This is just perfection. I can't even make sentences right now. Please update soon. D:
3/1/2014 c22 KitsuneNEH
Oh My God! Yes! I am really loving this! Keep up the good work.. i cant wait to find out how the awkwardness of this situation gets resolved.. or doesnt :P
Continue to write and i will continue to review XD
Oh My God! Yes! I am really loving this! Keep up the good work.. i cant wait to find out how the awkwardness of this situation gets resolved.. or doesnt :P
Continue to write and i will continue to review XD
3/1/2014 c22 MrsHerondale
OH MY GOSH! I just found your story and I LOVE! Immensely exciting for the next chapter :)
OH MY GOSH! I just found your story and I LOVE! Immensely exciting for the next chapter :)