11/28/2012 c1 Karma23
Hey I love this story so far, but I feel that Ana is always acting desperate around Seth. Maybe you should bring a new guy for a few chapters and actually make Seth jealous and make Ana act more confident and not caring towards Seth. And I really don't like Amanda I hope you don't add her in the story becasue she bothers me and I hope Seth stops having sex with her.
Hey I love this story so far, but I feel that Ana is always acting desperate around Seth. Maybe you should bring a new guy for a few chapters and actually make Seth jealous and make Ana act more confident and not caring towards Seth. And I really don't like Amanda I hope you don't add her in the story becasue she bothers me and I hope Seth stops having sex with her.
11/26/2012 c14 5rerte10
Hahaha this was the best! I LOVED it when Seth told everyone about his "favorite position", i was literally on the floor laughing and my sister thought i was INSANE! And awwww, Sadey and Tanner are together! Yayy! Bad Seth is awesome, i'm practically in love with him! Haha :P But I also thought it was nice and sweert...ish...when he sort of apologized at the end, that was cute :D but that Amanda! She seems like she could really cause some conflict or something, but I like it! Please please pleaseee update again soon! :D :D
Hahaha this was the best! I LOVED it when Seth told everyone about his "favorite position", i was literally on the floor laughing and my sister thought i was INSANE! And awwww, Sadey and Tanner are together! Yayy! Bad Seth is awesome, i'm practically in love with him! Haha :P But I also thought it was nice and sweert...ish...when he sort of apologized at the end, that was cute :D but that Amanda! She seems like she could really cause some conflict or something, but I like it! Please please pleaseee update again soon! :D :D
11/26/2012 c14 LisAngel83
Oh Seth...my little onion, full of layers...and I love every one of them - even when I want to smack you upside the head. LOVE that Si stole my line...but I like her, so I'm good with that :-P Love Ana in denial too...it's cute...she tries.
Oh Seth...my little onion, full of layers...and I love every one of them - even when I want to smack you upside the head. LOVE that Si stole my line...but I like her, so I'm good with that :-P Love Ana in denial too...it's cute...she tries.
11/26/2012 c14 Racka
The beginning of this chapter was steamy!
I'm so glad that Tanner and Sadey are together! *Happy Dance*
I hope that Seth will be able to play basketball really soon, hoping he won't be in a really bad mood because he can't.
And Sigrid is actually quite funny! I hope her and Ana become close friends soon :D
Great Chapter! Update soon. :D
The beginning of this chapter was steamy!
I'm so glad that Tanner and Sadey are together! *Happy Dance*
I hope that Seth will be able to play basketball really soon, hoping he won't be in a really bad mood because he can't.
And Sigrid is actually quite funny! I hope her and Ana become close friends soon :D
Great Chapter! Update soon. :D
11/25/2012 c14 Court-life
Absolutely frigging amazing! Haha I love it when Anais gets jealous :) It would be good if she slept with someone else...maybe Ryan and then Seth got jealous too, he needs a little tough loving haha or not but yeah more amanda stuff please cause it's so good. Great job again, your awesome and please update soon
Absolutely frigging amazing! Haha I love it when Anais gets jealous :) It would be good if she slept with someone else...maybe Ryan and then Seth got jealous too, he needs a little tough loving haha or not but yeah more amanda stuff please cause it's so good. Great job again, your awesome and please update soon
11/25/2012 c14 the abandoned
Ah! It was so good! I was so happy when I saw you had a new chapter up today! I wish I could see that every day!
Is there some sort of symbolism behind the song? I mean, the chorus lyrics are 'what the hell am I doing here? I don't belong here.' I've started to wonder if this is going to be a theme. :)
Great chapter. I like Bad Seth too!
Update soon!
Ah! It was so good! I was so happy when I saw you had a new chapter up today! I wish I could see that every day!
Is there some sort of symbolism behind the song? I mean, the chorus lyrics are 'what the hell am I doing here? I don't belong here.' I've started to wonder if this is going to be a theme. :)
Great chapter. I like Bad Seth too!
Update soon!
11/25/2012 c14 LaceyDancer
I loved this chapter even more than the last one! Awww Anais is jealous... not that she'd admit that ;)
Continue to write and I will gladly continue to review XD
I loved this chapter even more than the last one! Awww Anais is jealous... not that she'd admit that ;)
Continue to write and I will gladly continue to review XD
11/25/2012 c14 2isfuathliomgaeilge
Loved it! 3 poor seth! It sucks so bad 2 miss sport due 2 injury! I loved the U2 part with Creep! U gotta love the Irish! :) K x
Loved it! 3 poor seth! It sucks so bad 2 miss sport due 2 injury! I loved the U2 part with Creep! U gotta love the Irish! :) K x
11/25/2012 c14 2xTainted Lover
I love bad Seth! Also his bromance with Tanner.
His ankle must be killing him.
I hope you update soon because I love this story. You're an amazing writer. :)
I love bad Seth! Also his bromance with Tanner.
His ankle must be killing him.
I hope you update soon because I love this story. You're an amazing writer. :)
11/25/2012 c14 Rachie03
Your right Bad Seth is fun haha I liked how Ana kicked his crutch out from under him after he was being an ass to her. As for Seth I feel bad that he can't play basketball for months. OH WELL, that will mean frustration which will lead to sexual frustration which will lead to explosive sex between Ana and Seth that will be like a nuclear bomb. Oh I can't wait :D
Your right Bad Seth is fun haha I liked how Ana kicked his crutch out from under him after he was being an ass to her. As for Seth I feel bad that he can't play basketball for months. OH WELL, that will mean frustration which will lead to sexual frustration which will lead to explosive sex between Ana and Seth that will be like a nuclear bomb. Oh I can't wait :D
11/25/2012 c14 5Author-K-J-Lee
The singing was a little weird. Dunno why but it made me cringe with embarrassment a bit, that may be an english thing :P.
He wouldn't really be sleeping with amanda too, would he? I know fuck buddies are casual but there's usually only one at a time!
cliche.x
The singing was a little weird. Dunno why but it made me cringe with embarrassment a bit, that may be an english thing :P.
He wouldn't really be sleeping with amanda too, would he? I know fuck buddies are casual but there's usually only one at a time!
cliche.x
11/25/2012 c13 the abandoned
This chapter was definitely not crap! You're crazy! It was definitely nice to read amidst my growing insanity with my entire family here for thanksgiving!
I'm really excited for your next chapter! And the new character coming up! Boy or girl?
Keep up the good work!
This chapter was definitely not crap! You're crazy! It was definitely nice to read amidst my growing insanity with my entire family here for thanksgiving!
I'm really excited for your next chapter! And the new character coming up! Boy or girl?
Keep up the good work!
11/22/2012 c13 5rerte10
I saw this a while ago but never got a chance to actually read it until now, and it's one of the BEST things I have ever read on Fictionpress! Your characters are well-formed, I know it can be hard sometimes to keep their personalities consistent but I think your characters are great! Seth seems like he can be sweet sometimes, but also like he can just be a sex-loving ass. I like his double-sided personality. But Tanner is my favorite, he's hilarious! I could definitely compare him to some of my friends :D overall, I'm REALLY excited for the next chapter, I can't contain my excitement! Awesome jobbb! :D
I saw this a while ago but never got a chance to actually read it until now, and it's one of the BEST things I have ever read on Fictionpress! Your characters are well-formed, I know it can be hard sometimes to keep their personalities consistent but I think your characters are great! Seth seems like he can be sweet sometimes, but also like he can just be a sex-loving ass. I like his double-sided personality. But Tanner is my favorite, he's hilarious! I could definitely compare him to some of my friends :D overall, I'm REALLY excited for the next chapter, I can't contain my excitement! Awesome jobbb! :D