11/2/2012 c8 6Chola13
Love Tannner so so so much... this chapter has made me love him so much more... I want a friend like him! Please update soon! i want more! xxx
Love Tannner so so so much... this chapter has made me love him so much more... I want a friend like him! Please update soon! i want more! xxx
11/2/2012 c8 LisAngel83
You just had to go and make Tanner more loveable then he already is...and Ana is her own worst enemy - yay for fun with food coloring and boo for sisters who ruin the fun! :-\
You just had to go and make Tanner more loveable then he already is...and Ana is her own worst enemy - yay for fun with food coloring and boo for sisters who ruin the fun! :-\
10/30/2012 c7 1CubiaK
She was a bit… easy... A touch in expected. I would like it if Anais met his sister immediately after this little fiasco, that would be amusing :) that you muchly for updating!
She was a bit… easy... A touch in expected. I would like it if Anais met his sister immediately after this little fiasco, that would be amusing :) that you muchly for updating!
10/30/2012 c7 Rachie03
Yes the long awaited sex scene for Ana and Seth. I would just like to point out that that was the cutest thing when he was like it's not like fireworks, it's like the fucking Chernobyl explosion! Ahhhhhh so beautiful. SO SO SO worth the wait :) Can't wait till Ana tells Cassee YAY! thank you xx
Yes the long awaited sex scene for Ana and Seth. I would just like to point out that that was the cutest thing when he was like it's not like fireworks, it's like the fucking Chernobyl explosion! Ahhhhhh so beautiful. SO SO SO worth the wait :) Can't wait till Ana tells Cassee YAY! thank you xx
10/30/2012 c7 Racka
I loved this chapter! So steamy! haha. Please update soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
I loved this chapter! So steamy! haha. Please update soon! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
10/30/2012 c7 Rice20
Yep looks like more drama ahead! I am still not liking Seth too much. Hope he does something soon to change my mind. Can't wait for another chapter. Update soon :)
Yep looks like more drama ahead! I am still not liking Seth too much. Hope he does something soon to change my mind. Can't wait for another chapter. Update soon :)
10/30/2012 c7 LisAngel83
yay for fireworks and Chernobyl explosion's! And your words flowed very well (I agree about genital words - they're a little too medical and blatant). If you said she was keeping her shorts on one more time I was going to loose it...too hilarious. Great chapter - can't wait for further explosions and what not. Bring on the drama...Ana and Seth have too much fun with that and CLEARLY it does nothing but make the explosions better...
yay for fireworks and Chernobyl explosion's! And your words flowed very well (I agree about genital words - they're a little too medical and blatant). If you said she was keeping her shorts on one more time I was going to loose it...too hilarious. Great chapter - can't wait for further explosions and what not. Bring on the drama...Ana and Seth have too much fun with that and CLEARLY it does nothing but make the explosions better...
10/27/2012 c6 Courtney
Love your story, you are an amazing writer. Please update soon I am absolutely in love with Seth and I love Anais's sexual attraction to Seth but at the same time he stubborness that is similar to his, makes for a lot of sexual tension haha. Only one suggestion though, I think Seth needs to be a little bit more mean and resistant at times you know typical bad boy behaviour but at the same time he is still attracted to Anais :) Great story, can't wait to read more.
Love your story, you are an amazing writer. Please update soon I am absolutely in love with Seth and I love Anais's sexual attraction to Seth but at the same time he stubborness that is similar to his, makes for a lot of sexual tension haha. Only one suggestion though, I think Seth needs to be a little bit more mean and resistant at times you know typical bad boy behaviour but at the same time he is still attracted to Anais :) Great story, can't wait to read more.
10/26/2012 c6 2rii-lectricity
Still so awesome!
Seth is still a complete douche though...I want Tanner with his sex jokes and random insanity haha...
Also quick comment/recommendation: Do you think you could maybe put character names by the dialogue more? Like for example: instead of "(fill in whatever character says here)", it could be like, "(blahblahblah)" Seth grunted, or, 'Amanda smiled, "(blahblah)".' SeewhatImean? haha. I get confused in all the dialogue sometimes.
If it messes with the story too much, don't do it, 'cause I love the story! (: But it's just a suggestion for people like me who are way easily confused. Lol.
Still so awesome!
Seth is still a complete douche though...I want Tanner with his sex jokes and random insanity haha...
Also quick comment/recommendation: Do you think you could maybe put character names by the dialogue more? Like for example: instead of "(fill in whatever character says here)", it could be like, "(blahblahblah)" Seth grunted, or, 'Amanda smiled, "(blahblah)".' SeewhatImean? haha. I get confused in all the dialogue sometimes.
If it messes with the story too much, don't do it, 'cause I love the story! (: But it's just a suggestion for people like me who are way easily confused. Lol.
10/25/2012 c6 Rachie03
YES! Sadey and Tanner are so cute with the whole nudging the leg thing. I would love a Seth POV even if it is later also one for the cute confession of feelings between Tanner and Sadey if your ever bored and wish to write something because I would definitely read that. Thank you again for uploading and I can't wait till next week with the new chapter of both Seth and Ana in the same room ;)
YES! Sadey and Tanner are so cute with the whole nudging the leg thing. I would love a Seth POV even if it is later also one for the cute confession of feelings between Tanner and Sadey if your ever bored and wish to write something because I would definitely read that. Thank you again for uploading and I can't wait till next week with the new chapter of both Seth and Ana in the same room ;)