3/1/2014 c22 3Megsi
Oh, I'm so glad I found this story! I love it! I sat down and read it instead of packing to move, oops haha.
I love Anais and Seth's relationship, they're so cute, especially now what with the progress they've made.
There are some cliché elements to the story, but really, in a high school romance fiction that's to be expected, and you put enough of a spin of things and you write so well that it doesn't matter.
Especially since you included the whole thing with the mystery girl which adds a whole new element to the story because I'm so curious to find out her whole story/deal and it ensures we don't get tired of just reading about their (Ana/Seth's)relationship, a lot of fictionpress stories don't bother with developing elements outside of the relationship which is boring, even though they have enough chemistry that I can't be bored. Which leads (mystery girl) to my ramblings below haha.
Omg. Is Chelsea Caroline's twin? Or sister? Cousin? I knew Caroline was important as soon as she was mentioned, not for who she was but who she knew/was related to. Well, I think anyway. And Mason and Seth totally fought over her? But she chose Seth in the end and then somehow, she died? I feel like that's the only explanation but Mason seemed pretty casual when he said she moved away because her dad got a new job. Which could be true, I guess, but they also would've moved to move on if Chelsea died. Hmm. But still that also doesn't explain why Cassee and Tanner were angry about Seth taking Ana to a Thai resto and drive in movie, unless that's a separate thing, or a date routine he does to seduce and bang girls, or I just don't understand the connection yet. Or also, why Seth was so worried about the rain. Did Caroline die in the rain? Like a car accident? I thought maybe she was in the car with Mason and they crashed and she died, that's why Seth was agitated/frantic but then I don't know. Mason still seemed too casual to have inadvertently killed her/been there when she died when he was talking about Caroline/what he'd done to Seth. I could just be jumping to conclusions.,. But I love trying to figure things out!
My only real critique is that you have a few grammatical errors, that sometimes render sentences unreadable or leave words spelled wrong and you have a few issues with tense both in your narrative and dialogue where you switch between past and present. Otherwise, I love love love this story and can't wait for you to keep updating!

2/28/2014 c22 RomanticTeen
Oh my god this story is so good! I live it and I can't wait to find out about the Chelsea-Mason-Seth triangle and what Anais thinks!

2/27/2014 c21 LaceyDancer
You made my day.. checking my email and finding an alert for this story

Honestly, you could not update for years and i'd still continue to read this story.. not that you should test that because that would be horrible D:
Continue to write and I will continue to review XD
So happy

2/27/2014 c21 2EllySky
Never disappointed :-* great chapter xxxxxxx

2/27/2014 c21 Guest
I'm still here! Keep updating! This used to be my favorite story, and then I thought you were done updating. Don't stop!

9/16/2013 c20 mylittleprincess
amazing story! update more please.

9/15/2013 c20 save the manatee
Aww,man ,i thought that it wuz going to be a longer chapter! Please update soon ,i cant wait!

9/13/2013 c6 Twipothonmax
Hahah 'that was cool'. There you go :D