for Daggers Drawn4/19/2013 c1 
27Perisada
Very vivid imagery, and I love that you can practically feel the emotion seething from under this story, bubbling just below the surface. Once again, your prose is very poetic. I love your style. I also love your unique way of describing things. You don't focus on cliched details, but important ones, like his eyebrows disappearing into his curls, or the rage in his eyes. These help me paint a picture of the scene in my mind. Great work here!
27PerisadaVery vivid imagery, and I love that you can practically feel the emotion seething from under this story, bubbling just below the surface. Once again, your prose is very poetic. I love your style. I also love your unique way of describing things. You don't focus on cliched details, but important ones, like his eyebrows disappearing into his curls, or the rage in his eyes. These help me paint a picture of the scene in my mind. Great work here!
10/30/2012 c1 226Beth Brooks
haha wow i loved the twisted morbidness of this! the anger seethed of the page and it was written brilliantly! great work!
226Beth Brookshaha wow i loved the twisted morbidness of this! the anger seethed of the page and it was written brilliantly! great work!
10/29/2012 c1 5Ligeia Resurrected
I like it. And the fact that you wrote in second person makes me like it more. Your descriptive words painted pictures in my mind. I like your voice. Writing like "the threadbare tapestry that once been your existence" made me want to read more. Very good.
5Ligeia ResurrectedI like it. And the fact that you wrote in second person makes me like it more. Your descriptive words painted pictures in my mind. I like your voice. Writing like "the threadbare tapestry that once been your existence" made me want to read more. Very good.
10/19/2012 c1 9MagicWords
Holy smokes, this was so exciting! I read every word with anticipation for what was to happen next!
Your vivid imagery was so smooth and easy on the eyes, yet so foreboding. I also like the idea of the knife rather than a gun. Makes it more sinister and vengeful.
Great piece!
9MagicWordsHoly smokes, this was so exciting! I read every word with anticipation for what was to happen next!
Your vivid imagery was so smooth and easy on the eyes, yet so foreboding. I also like the idea of the knife rather than a gun. Makes it more sinister and vengeful.
Great piece!