
8/29/2013 c1
13JDFly
I had to try another one. Not as good as your 'Protector of Man' one-shot, but not bad. You should have ended it with them standing up and stepping out of the shallow hole.

I had to try another one. Not as good as your 'Protector of Man' one-shot, but not bad. You should have ended it with them standing up and stepping out of the shallow hole.
6/30/2013 c1
8TheRaven'sFeather
Hey there. First off, I am a huge fan of your stories, they're really really good.
This was quite the cute one-shot. One thing I will mention though is where you say 'they'd been popping his knee back into place' (and this is only if you're talking about the actual knee-cap, if not, completely ignore this message), unfortunately I know from experience that it's quite likely that he'd be able to push it back in himself.
But aside from that, great job.

Hey there. First off, I am a huge fan of your stories, they're really really good.
This was quite the cute one-shot. One thing I will mention though is where you say 'they'd been popping his knee back into place' (and this is only if you're talking about the actual knee-cap, if not, completely ignore this message), unfortunately I know from experience that it's quite likely that he'd be able to push it back in himself.
But aside from that, great job.
6/27/2013 c1 MayaLala
Ohhh, I never read author's notes but I am glad I did. This one was sad. I once had a horrible day and wrote the saddest and best one shot I had ever written.
Ohhh, I never read author's notes but I am glad I did. This one was sad. I once had a horrible day and wrote the saddest and best one shot I had ever written.
6/26/2013 c1 Lou
ohhh, that was lovely, thanks :-)
ohhh, that was lovely, thanks :-)
4/16/2013 c1
18found.eventually
You're too good. Gosh tonight I'm gonna fall asleep thinking of this story. It's that good, I loved it.

You're too good. Gosh tonight I'm gonna fall asleep thinking of this story. It's that good, I loved it.
4/12/2013 c1 yay
This one is really sweet.
This one is really sweet.
3/20/2013 c1
22kris tay
Oh my god, I read this and I felt so much better about my crappy day! Hahahaha Cheers to the weird unnamed couple in a hole!

Oh my god, I read this and I felt so much better about my crappy day! Hahahaha Cheers to the weird unnamed couple in a hole!
2/17/2013 c1 An
So funny and cute!
So funny and cute!
2/16/2013 c1
7Mr. Ree
Hey there! Your story has been added to the "Oneshot" category of A Drop of Romeo :) Here's the review:
Ali thinks: What’s a good way to get over a weird situation? Get into another situation that’s equally as—if not more—weird. Calling the friend you kissed and have been avoiding every since to help you get out a literal hole would definitely fall into the “more weird” category.
In just one scene (that takes place in a hole, no less), star123 takes a very unorthodox situation between two friends and turns it into a one-shot that is basically the definition of short and sweet.
It was lovely how, despite the obvious tension between the two companions, there is still a light undertone of humor that surrounds them and their story. Their relationship was realistic and charming, the way they communicate making it clear how familiar and comfortable with each other they are, even while their circumstances are anything but.
This one-shot is short enough to only take a few minutes out of your day, fun enough to make you laugh, and cute enough to put a smile on your face. You make thousands of choices and investments every day, and reading “The Hole Already Filled with Weird” would be a great addition to them.

Hey there! Your story has been added to the "Oneshot" category of A Drop of Romeo :) Here's the review:
Ali thinks: What’s a good way to get over a weird situation? Get into another situation that’s equally as—if not more—weird. Calling the friend you kissed and have been avoiding every since to help you get out a literal hole would definitely fall into the “more weird” category.
In just one scene (that takes place in a hole, no less), star123 takes a very unorthodox situation between two friends and turns it into a one-shot that is basically the definition of short and sweet.
It was lovely how, despite the obvious tension between the two companions, there is still a light undertone of humor that surrounds them and their story. Their relationship was realistic and charming, the way they communicate making it clear how familiar and comfortable with each other they are, even while their circumstances are anything but.
This one-shot is short enough to only take a few minutes out of your day, fun enough to make you laugh, and cute enough to put a smile on your face. You make thousands of choices and investments every day, and reading “The Hole Already Filled with Weird” would be a great addition to them.
1/25/2013 c1 Annie
Brilliant! I loved this story. It's unholy! XD
Brilliant! I loved this story. It's unholy! XD