
3/29/2013 c1
3E.C. Grey
Nice work. I particularly like the line: "with impetuous disregard for the human at the bottom of their noses". I also found the line "I steam milk until (...) extra hot" to be poignant. I'm not sure exactly what it is about the line, but it evokes a certain image/scene in my mind that just really works for me.
- e.

Nice work. I particularly like the line: "with impetuous disregard for the human at the bottom of their noses". I also found the line "I steam milk until (...) extra hot" to be poignant. I'm not sure exactly what it is about the line, but it evokes a certain image/scene in my mind that just really works for me.
- e.