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10/30/2012 c1 Ann Simpson
Great scene descriptions! I was in the city right there with the characters. What a gloomy place, prison guard buildings, cold uncaring people if not downright mean. A young girl fighting addiction and the saddness in her eyes. But look around her in the cold city, she's surrounded by gloom. You're right you do write well.

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