9/27/2019 c16 Hellokitty70705
One of THE best slash fic I have ever read, hands down! I love your characters, and the emotions you drive through them, drive through me—literally piercing me. Your writing style is amazing, and it has such a raw quality. I’m so sad you haven’t updated—if you ever do, I will definitely be looking forward to it!
One of THE best slash fic I have ever read, hands down! I love your characters, and the emotions you drive through them, drive through me—literally piercing me. Your writing style is amazing, and it has such a raw quality. I’m so sad you haven’t updated—if you ever do, I will definitely be looking forward to it!
1/24/2016 c16 Songbird
The latter half of this reminds me so much of the song "Cross My Heart" by Marianas Trench
The latter half of this reminds me so much of the song "Cross My Heart" by Marianas Trench
1/3/2016 c16 guest
please don't end it right here you need to finish or i don't think ill be able to fix my heart!
please don't end it right here you need to finish or i don't think ill be able to fix my heart!
12/31/2015 c1 guest
this is already cute story can't wait to read more of it :)
this is already cute story can't wait to read more of it :)
12/9/2015 c16 iwanttodeletethiswtf
Hey just so you know, I'm still here for this story, no matter how long it takes. Like you said, life gets in the way and has other plans, but I hope that one day you're in a place where you can come back to this story. You're very talented, so I'd love to see where this goes.
Hey just so you know, I'm still here for this story, no matter how long it takes. Like you said, life gets in the way and has other plans, but I hope that one day you're in a place where you can come back to this story. You're very talented, so I'd love to see where this goes.
11/8/2015 c16 XxEyeOfTheStormxX
I think that you're a wonderful author. Seriously, you're on par with Jane Austen and John Green. I would love it if you would continue writing this story. It's just getting all good and intricate and I really can't wait to see what happens next to your characters. You make things so real, it's truly astounding.
I think that you're a wonderful author. Seriously, you're on par with Jane Austen and John Green. I would love it if you would continue writing this story. It's just getting all good and intricate and I really can't wait to see what happens next to your characters. You make things so real, it's truly astounding.
10/30/2015 c16 Guest
Patiently waiting for this story to be continued
Patiently waiting for this story to be continued
9/15/2015 c16 MalexisSwerve
So... this being updated any time soon? 'Cause, to be honest, I read this story in like 7 hours and I am getting fidgety that it hasn't been updated in a year.
Please update... I will be refreshing... please :(
So... this being updated any time soon? 'Cause, to be honest, I read this story in like 7 hours and I am getting fidgety that it hasn't been updated in a year.
Please update... I will be refreshing... please :(
8/11/2015 c16 7Caisele
It's so easy to make Julie the villain but you write her so well it's also easy to feel sorry for her. And I'm feeling sorry for Trey and Kevin too because this is so messed up but how it happened seems so natural like it was the only way things could have gone. And while Trey is a victim it's also easy to see him as Julie sees him.
Anyway, good story...messed up but great writing. Thanks.
It's so easy to make Julie the villain but you write her so well it's also easy to feel sorry for her. And I'm feeling sorry for Trey and Kevin too because this is so messed up but how it happened seems so natural like it was the only way things could have gone. And while Trey is a victim it's also easy to see him as Julie sees him.
Anyway, good story...messed up but great writing. Thanks.
6/8/2015 c16 deedee
Oh gosh. I hate myself. I saw a rec online for one of your other stories and I clicked on your profile and saw play dates. I immediately wanted to read it but decided not to since I saw it had been a couple of months since you updated. But alas I couldn't stay away and after 3 days I cracked amd started to read. Now I am here at the last updated chapter completely hooked and invested into these characters and their happiness. Trey and Kevin have some serious emotional issues and I love how you didn't gloss over that. There relationship should be very dysfunctional and a catastrophe just waiting to happen but you've managed to convey that these two will be alright. Anyway I adore this story and hope you update soon. Thank you for writing this gem of a story!
Oh gosh. I hate myself. I saw a rec online for one of your other stories and I clicked on your profile and saw play dates. I immediately wanted to read it but decided not to since I saw it had been a couple of months since you updated. But alas I couldn't stay away and after 3 days I cracked amd started to read. Now I am here at the last updated chapter completely hooked and invested into these characters and their happiness. Trey and Kevin have some serious emotional issues and I love how you didn't gloss over that. There relationship should be very dysfunctional and a catastrophe just waiting to happen but you've managed to convey that these two will be alright. Anyway I adore this story and hope you update soon. Thank you for writing this gem of a story!
4/22/2015 c16 3MaddamAndRobin
I love this story, but it's breaking my heart. I just can't see how this is going to end well. I vote for a happy ending and hope for the best. Xoxo Robin
I love this story, but it's breaking my heart. I just can't see how this is going to end well. I vote for a happy ending and hope for the best. Xoxo Robin
4/2/2015 c16 6Starlite Nightfall
FUCK. WHY. WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME? Why would you end this glorious story RIGHT here? I swear, you are the most in the closet sadist. I have been putting off reading this story for months. Ever since I started reading "High Conversations on Cosmic Inflation" and was so enthralled and in love with your writing and I decided to check up on your other stories, but they just never caught my eye until last night when I decided to give this story a try.
I don't even know why I hesitated all these months. This story is everything. I'm so absolutely in love with all of the characters. Except maybe Eva and Anna, but I'm sure they'll grow into lovely young women...someday. I started reading this story last night at like...9 or 10pm and didn't stop until almost 4am, passed out, woke up from a phone call at 11am and then finished reading it until 1pm. And now it's been almost a year since you've updated it!
You have no idea how happy I am that you decided to come back and give this story a little lovin', but I'm assuming this stopped updating because High Conversations started, which I am so down for, but THIS. YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE THIS LIKE THIS. I can't. I need it. All the sexy scenes were soooo good and your writing is so entrancing. I felt like I knew these people and I wanted to help! I was like "I'll babysit! Go take a break, Trey!" I really need next chapter to happen because Trey's admittance is what I've been waiting for and my body can't even handle how good this all was in every single aspect. You are insanely good at pacing and that is so hard to find in stories set in modern times and realistic settings.
Favoriting the shit out of this story. Please update, girl! I promise that for next chapter my review won't be a short story. Maybe. Probably.
FUCK. WHY. WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME? Why would you end this glorious story RIGHT here? I swear, you are the most in the closet sadist. I have been putting off reading this story for months. Ever since I started reading "High Conversations on Cosmic Inflation" and was so enthralled and in love with your writing and I decided to check up on your other stories, but they just never caught my eye until last night when I decided to give this story a try.
I don't even know why I hesitated all these months. This story is everything. I'm so absolutely in love with all of the characters. Except maybe Eva and Anna, but I'm sure they'll grow into lovely young women...someday. I started reading this story last night at like...9 or 10pm and didn't stop until almost 4am, passed out, woke up from a phone call at 11am and then finished reading it until 1pm. And now it's been almost a year since you've updated it!
You have no idea how happy I am that you decided to come back and give this story a little lovin', but I'm assuming this stopped updating because High Conversations started, which I am so down for, but THIS. YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE THIS LIKE THIS. I can't. I need it. All the sexy scenes were soooo good and your writing is so entrancing. I felt like I knew these people and I wanted to help! I was like "I'll babysit! Go take a break, Trey!" I really need next chapter to happen because Trey's admittance is what I've been waiting for and my body can't even handle how good this all was in every single aspect. You are insanely good at pacing and that is so hard to find in stories set in modern times and realistic settings.
Favoriting the shit out of this story. Please update, girl! I promise that for next chapter my review won't be a short story. Maybe. Probably.
12/20/2014 c16 Sera
Just want you to know I really love this story and have been reading it since the beginning. If you still have tome, I will read all the future chapters you post. I have seriously never read something like this before and you've made the characters so real and flawed. Love your work.
Just want you to know I really love this story and have been reading it since the beginning. If you still have tome, I will read all the future chapters you post. I have seriously never read something like this before and you've made the characters so real and flawed. Love your work.
9/16/2014 c16 chibikodo
Oh what a quagmire... what is Trey going to do? His wife's infidelity is just as depressing as his own accidental indiscretions. And poor Kevin and the children are caught in the middle.
It's crazy for Julie to keep up her affair yet give Trey an ultimatum that would keep him miserable and tethered out of love and responsibility for his kids.
Oh what a quagmire... what is Trey going to do? His wife's infidelity is just as depressing as his own accidental indiscretions. And poor Kevin and the children are caught in the middle.
It's crazy for Julie to keep up her affair yet give Trey an ultimatum that would keep him miserable and tethered out of love and responsibility for his kids.
9/3/2014 c16 Guest
Ah I checked this story again for an update on a whim and I'm so glad to see you've updated. I understand that its easy to stop writing a story and losing a bit of interest in it but I hope that if you do start another story that you don't forget this one. Really looking forward to the next chapter :)
Ah I checked this story again for an update on a whim and I'm so glad to see you've updated. I understand that its easy to stop writing a story and losing a bit of interest in it but I hope that if you do start another story that you don't forget this one. Really looking forward to the next chapter :)