for I Married a Douchebag11/16/2012 c2 Amber Dawn12
Okay, this is really good, but in the next chapter u should give a background to arriana's life, like who she is where she comes from, stuff like that family and such. From the picture it looks like both drew and arianna are African-American, but u should clear that up anyway.
Okay, this is really good, but in the next chapter u should give a background to arriana's life, like who she is where she comes from, stuff like that family and such. From the picture it looks like both drew and arianna are African-American, but u should clear that up anyway.
11/12/2012 c2 Fay Fibonacci
Hey, that was nice, BUT, Mr dean asked "what r the common forms of sexual reproduction", and drew answered " asexual" yh that doesn't make any sense.
Hey, that was nice, BUT, Mr dean asked "what r the common forms of sexual reproduction", and drew answered " asexual" yh that doesn't make any sense.
11/11/2012 c2 TamikaT
I love This chapter. Drew is just too cute with the little kisses here and there. Arianna is so awesome. I love that she is not the stereotypical cheerleader...My favorite lines in this are: ""Great job girls!" I said enthusiastically. That's the worst thing I hate about cheerleading. I'm completly emo when it comes to cheering. While everyone is all, "WOOOOOO! YEAAAAAH! GO TEEEEEEEAAAAAMMMM!" I'm the main one waving one pom pom in the air going, "Raw...raw...whatever." It's hard to work up that much enthusiasm when you really have no one to cheer for. Although when they put Will in the games my spirit level hits the roof."
LOL Raw...raw...whatever! Please keep writing!
I love This chapter. Drew is just too cute with the little kisses here and there. Arianna is so awesome. I love that she is not the stereotypical cheerleader...My favorite lines in this are: ""Great job girls!" I said enthusiastically. That's the worst thing I hate about cheerleading. I'm completly emo when it comes to cheering. While everyone is all, "WOOOOOO! YEAAAAAH! GO TEEEEEEEAAAAAMMMM!" I'm the main one waving one pom pom in the air going, "Raw...raw...whatever." It's hard to work up that much enthusiasm when you really have no one to cheer for. Although when they put Will in the games my spirit level hits the roof."
LOL Raw...raw...whatever! Please keep writing!
11/11/2012 c2 Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling
Oooh...This is an interesting story. *grins evilly* I likes! *adds to favorite*
Oooh...This is an interesting story. *grins evilly* I likes! *adds to favorite*
11/10/2012 c2 foxyricanlady
That was really good. Cant wait for the next update please lit it be soon.
That was really good. Cant wait for the next update please lit it be soon.
10/28/2012 c1 
1starlight91
This is funny! Haha I like it so far. This is interesting. I'm looking forward to future chapters! Maybe proofread some after you finish a chapter. But yeah, pretty great!
1starlight91This is funny! Haha I like it so far. This is interesting. I'm looking forward to future chapters! Maybe proofread some after you finish a chapter. But yeah, pretty great!
10/25/2012 c1 TamikaT
YES! You are literary gold! I love this and so now I have 4 stories of yours to keep track of so get to work woman...I need updates, chapters, words...LOL! I demand you quit school and write only for me...LOL! Just kidding! Please keep writing!
YES! You are literary gold! I love this and so now I have 4 stories of yours to keep track of so get to work woman...I need updates, chapters, words...LOL! I demand you quit school and write only for me...LOL! Just kidding! Please keep writing!
10/24/2012 c1 3Draycono
I cant wait to read more o3o I'm not sure if its just cause i was hyper, or tired, or what, but i think i was giggling wayyyy more than most people would while reading this xDD
3DrayconoI cant wait to read more o3o I'm not sure if its just cause i was hyper, or tired, or what, but i think i was giggling wayyyy more than most people would while reading this xDD
10/24/2012 c1 moonie forever
I really like this story so far I can't wait to find out what happens next :)
I really like this story so far I can't wait to find out what happens next :)
10/24/2012 c1 Guest
Love this story. Is there going to be more or is it just a one shot? :)
Love this story. Is there going to be more or is it just a one shot? :)