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for The Old Woman in the Cemetery

10/26/2012 c1 Bloody Bridgette
My, my, my, that was truly chilling. I like the images, and the fact that instead of cheking on the woman right away, Daniel decided to do it later - not sure why, but I found that bit made it all much spookier.

You might have pushed it a little with the 'master' and 'void' thing, I think you could've left it a mystery, but maybe that's just me.

In general, great work, it's hard to find good stories around here ;)

Oh, and I do have an account ( pen name Bloody Bridgette), if you want to reply.

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