10/27/2012 c2 8TheRaven'sFeather
Hey there. I like the premise for the story. But I have to say, so far this is looking less like a supernatural story, and more like a 'I'm a goth and I hate preppy people and the colour pink, so I'm going to write about how a goth girl that hates preps gets a super hot guy and beats the meanie fake popular girl' story. I know that sounds really harsh, but that's what it comes off as to me. I'm not trying to flame you. I hope you prove me wrong and that the story will have more depth in it.
Good luck with the rest of the story.