for Crossing Borders10/30/2012 c1 870188
"...by being so easy to cross." what an amazing end! after spending some time sifting through some of the lamer fp bits of stuff in the Just In, your poem came as quite a refreshing surprise. excellent images. there's this almost exhaustive struggle of fragility vs. strength, or rather, the illusion of it. when i think about it, this is actually quite a romantic poem, but definitely with an added tragic fringe.
"...by being so easy to cross." what an amazing end! after spending some time sifting through some of the lamer fp bits of stuff in the Just In, your poem came as quite a refreshing surprise. excellent images. there's this almost exhaustive struggle of fragility vs. strength, or rather, the illusion of it. when i think about it, this is actually quite a romantic poem, but definitely with an added tragic fringe.