for Murder Of La Luna (Ex-murderer book 2)4/10/2013 c18 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
No problem! XD I think I speak for all of us when I say "we're always here to help!" Correct me if I'm wrong. :)
No problem! XD I think I speak for all of us when I say "we're always here to help!" Correct me if I'm wrong. :)
4/10/2013 c18 
102Kathryn Claire O'Connor
Thanks for mentioning me here! I'll definitely go check out the other book. Good job on this one.:)
102Kathryn Claire O'ConnorThanks for mentioning me here! I'll definitely go check out the other book. Good job on this one.:)
4/7/2013 c16 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Yay! XD Glad to see you're still alive and writing! Two things. One: check some of the spelling. (Just a few words, nothing more. And for their family names I don't think you need the apostrophe.) Two: Maybe you shouldn't rush things too much. I kinda felt like you were during the previous chapters. Take your time. Also, I KNEW IT! I KNEW THAT NOTE WAS FOR HER! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Yay! XD Glad to see you're still alive and writing! Two things. One: check some of the spelling. (Just a few words, nothing more. And for their family names I don't think you need the apostrophe.) Two: Maybe you shouldn't rush things too much. I kinda felt like you were during the previous chapters. Take your time. Also, I KNEW IT! I KNEW THAT NOTE WAS FOR HER! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
3/21/2013 c15 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Even fewer! XD Anyways, good work, as always. :) (I'm starting to run out of things to say LOL. )
Even fewer! XD Anyways, good work, as always. :) (I'm starting to run out of things to say LOL. )
2/26/2013 c14 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
A few mistakes, sometimes with punctuation and grammar. But overall it was fine and understandable. I suggest a bit more proofreading though. And adding lines between changes in character perspective. Sometimes you miss that and the story is bit confusing then. But the chapter is great and I look forwards to the next one.
A few mistakes, sometimes with punctuation and grammar. But overall it was fine and understandable. I suggest a bit more proofreading though. And adding lines between changes in character perspective. Sometimes you miss that and the story is bit confusing then. But the chapter is great and I look forwards to the next one.
1/11/2013 c9 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
...I liked her grandmother...too bad she died soon after she first made an appearance...
...I liked her grandmother...too bad she died soon after she first made an appearance...
12/13/2012 c6 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
LOL Matt's joke made me laugh as well. Great chapter! XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XD
LOL Matt's joke made me laugh as well. Great chapter! XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XD