for Guinea Pig4/14/2017 c23 Chelsea
I know its been a few years, and the chance of you seeing my review are slim, but hope you decide to come back to this one day, i really like it!
I know its been a few years, and the chance of you seeing my review are slim, but hope you decide to come back to this one day, i really like it!
5/18/2016 c23 lorayann
i find Ellie's character pretty interesting..i wanna create a loveline bet her nd Jacques i think they look ..kkkk
i find Ellie's character pretty interesting..i wanna create a loveline bet her nd Jacques i think they look ..kkkk
7/11/2015 c23 Heise
This is amazing. I am constantly mind blown by how vivid your writing is, how strong and diverse and lovely your characters are. I remember being totally obsessed with that eating contest scene at Vito's - with Colt struggling and Jacques' calm "marching on like a trooper" uncaring about the girls next to him, lol. It was so vivid. I truly feel like I know exactly who these kids are, almost. Well, not exactly, but like about as close as I know some boys in high school. Truly. So gorgeous. You are a GORGEOUS writer. And this Santi Scott thing is keeping me on the edge of my seat! But not totally, because I am also totally taken with Willa, who is endlessly sweet and inspiring and strong. I want to be her. Lol. Thanks so much for this treat. Keep going, please!
This is amazing. I am constantly mind blown by how vivid your writing is, how strong and diverse and lovely your characters are. I remember being totally obsessed with that eating contest scene at Vito's - with Colt struggling and Jacques' calm "marching on like a trooper" uncaring about the girls next to him, lol. It was so vivid. I truly feel like I know exactly who these kids are, almost. Well, not exactly, but like about as close as I know some boys in high school. Truly. So gorgeous. You are a GORGEOUS writer. And this Santi Scott thing is keeping me on the edge of my seat! But not totally, because I am also totally taken with Willa, who is endlessly sweet and inspiring and strong. I want to be her. Lol. Thanks so much for this treat. Keep going, please!
8/23/2014 c23 kabzfuntym
Still waiting for u to write the next chapter
Still waiting for u to write the next chapter
8/5/2014 c23 Infinite Sky
awww I just read this chapter again and I forgot how much I liked this story. I really hope you continue it. I'm sure your life has been super busy though so I understand. :)
before, I didn't really care who Willa ended up with. Both Santi and Scott are such great guys...but I have to say...after reading this again I really want Scott and Willa to be together! They just compliment each other so well...I don't know what it is.
I think that Santi is almost too similar to Willa for them to work out. Also, it's obvious that Willa likes Scott a lot more than Santi, and I feel like she probably mostly likes Santi because he likes her(I could be wrong, of course.)
Ughh Scott what's wrong with you! why don't you like Willa?
Anyway, I hope you update as soon as you are able, and I hope that you finish this story!
awww I just read this chapter again and I forgot how much I liked this story. I really hope you continue it. I'm sure your life has been super busy though so I understand. :)
before, I didn't really care who Willa ended up with. Both Santi and Scott are such great guys...but I have to say...after reading this again I really want Scott and Willa to be together! They just compliment each other so well...I don't know what it is.
I think that Santi is almost too similar to Willa for them to work out. Also, it's obvious that Willa likes Scott a lot more than Santi, and I feel like she probably mostly likes Santi because he likes her(I could be wrong, of course.)
Ughh Scott what's wrong with you! why don't you like Willa?
Anyway, I hope you update as soon as you are able, and I hope that you finish this story!
6/25/2014 c23 guest
Where r u? Have u fallen of th face of th earth bcos I really want this story
Where r u? Have u fallen of th face of th earth bcos I really want this story
1/15/2014 c23 sparx01
OH MY GOD
HOW DID I NOT NOTICE YOUR UPDATE?!
As usual, the chapter was lovely! I love seeing the differences between Santi and Willa vs. Scott and Willa.
Don't worry, love. School should be your priority. I hope you had a lovely holiday!
Until next time :)
OH MY GOD
HOW DID I NOT NOTICE YOUR UPDATE?!
As usual, the chapter was lovely! I love seeing the differences between Santi and Willa vs. Scott and Willa.
Don't worry, love. School should be your priority. I hope you had a lovely holiday!
Until next time :)
12/24/2013 c23 
3kittykat0611
I hope you're continuing the next chapter (can't wait) since it is December and I have college friends who are already on break (hope you are too) :DD Love your stories and hope you continue them.
3kittykat0611I hope you're continuing the next chapter (can't wait) since it is December and I have college friends who are already on break (hope you are too) :DD Love your stories and hope you continue them.
11/28/2013 c23 16Aretice N. Treader
This chapter was really cute. I liked it, especially the puppy. There were a couple of issues with new paragraphs and dialogue, but this chapter was still good.
16Aretice N. TreaderThis chapter was really cute. I liked it, especially the puppy. There were a couple of issues with new paragraphs and dialogue, but this chapter was still good.
11/21/2013 c23 7Sunnycanary
Please update soon! I really love this story. It's absolutely awesometastic!
7SunnycanaryPlease update soon! I really love this story. It's absolutely awesometastic!
11/17/2013 c23 11SunnySideUp26
Yay you're back! I'm only in high school, but I think I get what you're going through with a busy schedule. I went from updating once a day to updating once a month. Someone actually said they thought I was dead! Ahh I don't know how I want it to end! I keep going back and forth between Scott and Santi. I can't handle love triangles! Anyway, great chapter, and take your time with the next one.
11SunnySideUp26Yay you're back! I'm only in high school, but I think I get what you're going through with a busy schedule. I went from updating once a day to updating once a month. Someone actually said they thought I was dead! Ahh I don't know how I want it to end! I keep going back and forth between Scott and Santi. I can't handle love triangles! Anyway, great chapter, and take your time with the next one.
11/16/2013 c23 1Lady Lyxxi
I. Love. This. Story. I really hope you stick with this and finish it. I know of way to many authors who write amazing stories, just to abandon them.
And like you said, you have your own path that you are going on, so obviously I have no idea what will be occurring. However, at this point of time, I feel an extremely strong connection to the story. I relate SO MUCH to Willa's position. I actually like this guy, NAMED SCOTT, since elementary school. And he is athletic, and in a lot of advanced classes, and is super popular. And I have a guy friend (his name is not Santiago...) who I made friends with recently, and I just recently found he likes me. I like them both, and am completely torn.
Also, like Willa, I have just recently tried to come out of my introverted self and be more social.
Anyway, please update soon!
1Lady LyxxiI. Love. This. Story. I really hope you stick with this and finish it. I know of way to many authors who write amazing stories, just to abandon them.
And like you said, you have your own path that you are going on, so obviously I have no idea what will be occurring. However, at this point of time, I feel an extremely strong connection to the story. I relate SO MUCH to Willa's position. I actually like this guy, NAMED SCOTT, since elementary school. And he is athletic, and in a lot of advanced classes, and is super popular. And I have a guy friend (his name is not Santiago...) who I made friends with recently, and I just recently found he likes me. I like them both, and am completely torn.
Also, like Willa, I have just recently tried to come out of my introverted self and be more social.
Anyway, please update soon!
11/15/2013 c23 bluerose62
ASDFGHJKL I read what you have of this story in one day. I know I shouldn't have because I has two tests today, but ermagerd, I loved it! (don't worry, I studied too) For some reason, I am addicted to this story, and that hasn't happened in a while. Great job and can't wait to read some more!
ASDFGHJKL I read what you have of this story in one day. I know I shouldn't have because I has two tests today, but ermagerd, I loved it! (don't worry, I studied too) For some reason, I am addicted to this story, and that hasn't happened in a while. Great job and can't wait to read some more!
11/15/2013 c23 ellaybee
I cannot wait to read the next chapter! I love the chemistry between Willa and Santi. And I still typically adore Scott. Also, I now want a puppy. I can't believe I'd forgotten how absolutely adorable they are!
It's great to see an update from you! I've been waiting very anxiously for it. I hope you're managing with your rough schedule.
Take care!
I cannot wait to read the next chapter! I love the chemistry between Willa and Santi. And I still typically adore Scott. Also, I now want a puppy. I can't believe I'd forgotten how absolutely adorable they are!
It's great to see an update from you! I've been waiting very anxiously for it. I hope you're managing with your rough schedule.
Take care!