for Senses1/6/2013 c26 
6MorWolfMor
Hmmm this is quite good so far. I'm enjoying it and the characters, though I do have to say, I'd suggest looking for a beta to help out. Some parts of the story are confusing, though if I re-read it, can get it. I'd just suggest havin someone to help with the flow of the story. It's very good though, I look forward to more :)
Wolfy
6MorWolfMorHmmm this is quite good so far. I'm enjoying it and the characters, though I do have to say, I'd suggest looking for a beta to help out. Some parts of the story are confusing, though if I re-read it, can get it. I'd just suggest havin someone to help with the flow of the story. It's very good though, I look forward to more :)
Wolfy
12/28/2012 c1 Anon
Your imagination is great and the idea behind the story is captivating but no offense you dont really have a very developed style of writing yet and all the sentences look like the previous one, its really repetitive, you have to show not tell the reader what is happening! Hope it helps :)
Your imagination is great and the idea behind the story is captivating but no offense you dont really have a very developed style of writing yet and all the sentences look like the previous one, its really repetitive, you have to show not tell the reader what is happening! Hope it helps :)
12/1/2012 c2 2SethMelvin
HOLY CRAP. PUBLISH THIS.
YOU ARE AN INSPIRATION.
I'm surprised I even stopped reading long enough to type this. That's how good it is. Only 2 chapters in and you're on a role! :)
2SethMelvinHOLY CRAP. PUBLISH THIS.
YOU ARE AN INSPIRATION.
I'm surprised I even stopped reading long enough to type this. That's how good it is. Only 2 chapters in and you're on a role! :)
11/29/2012 c1 Felrain
Good first chapter, one thing I caught was that in the first paragraph it says 'swear swords', my sure if that was intentional or not!
Good first chapter, one thing I caught was that in the first paragraph it says 'swear swords', my sure if that was intentional or not!