for The Do-Gooder11/11/2013 c22 Luv2Live
Fabulous chapter as always. Wasn't as sure about this story in the beginning but it has so grown on me. Thanks for updating
Fabulous chapter as always. Wasn't as sure about this story in the beginning but it has so grown on me. Thanks for updating
11/11/2013 c22 sootyxsnowpetal
It's late (or early?) on a night before I have a programming midterm due and I love distractions such as yours. If there's anything to brighten up a struggling and brain dead person, it's a chapter filled with characters who are so well defined and realistic, who act and react so seamlessly. By this point I don't even think I have anything else to say in a review for your stories other than that I really enjoyed reading it and definitely look forward patiently for the next update. There are some of my comments here and there (Lara seems like she's going to set aside her issue with Fletch to help Saskia - the do-gooder within her) but overall I'm content waiting to see what happens next!
As always, thanks, good work, love you lots :)
It's late (or early?) on a night before I have a programming midterm due and I love distractions such as yours. If there's anything to brighten up a struggling and brain dead person, it's a chapter filled with characters who are so well defined and realistic, who act and react so seamlessly. By this point I don't even think I have anything else to say in a review for your stories other than that I really enjoyed reading it and definitely look forward patiently for the next update. There are some of my comments here and there (Lara seems like she's going to set aside her issue with Fletch to help Saskia - the do-gooder within her) but overall I'm content waiting to see what happens next!
As always, thanks, good work, love you lots :)
11/10/2013 c21 
12Life Love Sanity
Oh dear! Just read the whole story and I love it! Especially fletch. His heart of gold is the best and I hope Lara realizes it soon. She is already dependent on him, just accept it!
Okay okay can't wait for more! Need to find out what happened at the police station..
12Life Love SanityOh dear! Just read the whole story and I love it! Especially fletch. His heart of gold is the best and I hope Lara realizes it soon. She is already dependent on him, just accept it!
Okay okay can't wait for more! Need to find out what happened at the police station..
11/10/2013 c1 Lindsay K
HAPPY ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY!
HAPPY ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY!
11/8/2013 c21 2auroraglider
The title to this chapter is most appropriate. The facades that both Lara and Fletch have been hiding behind have been broken much like a reflection would be if a looking glass got broke. They both had become so comfortable in their false images they had created for themselves that when they each are suddenly alerted to the reality of how things really are in their lives they can hardly believe it. The sooner they accept the truth of why and how things really are, the sooner they can finally be happy together. Great chapter. Totally exciting and intriguing.
2auroragliderThe title to this chapter is most appropriate. The facades that both Lara and Fletch have been hiding behind have been broken much like a reflection would be if a looking glass got broke. They both had become so comfortable in their false images they had created for themselves that when they each are suddenly alerted to the reality of how things really are in their lives they can hardly believe it. The sooner they accept the truth of why and how things really are, the sooner they can finally be happy together. Great chapter. Totally exciting and intriguing.
11/7/2013 c21 K
Hi! I usually don't review - or read anything posted that hasn't been completed, for the record. But I'd just made it through all your other stories, and I loved everything about every one of your other stories, so I decided to give it a go. Boy, am I not sorry about that. Best. Decision. I'm in uni, midterms have rolled around, and I'm lolling about reading your stories because 1) your plot lines are entertaining, 2) your writing is witty, and 3) your characters are absolutely fantastic. Right up my alley. Keep up the awesome writing, and please don't leave me with a cliff-hanger for too long - I won't be able to survive! The antagonistic-yet-somehow-fantastically-loving tension between F and L? I'm officially hooked. Cheers!
Hi! I usually don't review - or read anything posted that hasn't been completed, for the record. But I'd just made it through all your other stories, and I loved everything about every one of your other stories, so I decided to give it a go. Boy, am I not sorry about that. Best. Decision. I'm in uni, midterms have rolled around, and I'm lolling about reading your stories because 1) your plot lines are entertaining, 2) your writing is witty, and 3) your characters are absolutely fantastic. Right up my alley. Keep up the awesome writing, and please don't leave me with a cliff-hanger for too long - I won't be able to survive! The antagonistic-yet-somehow-fantastically-loving tension between F and L? I'm officially hooked. Cheers!
11/7/2013 c21 Lenny
Have you already something in mind for after The Do-Gooder?
Have you already something in mind for after The Do-Gooder?
11/6/2013 c21 2BurstofPassion
I knew she had pneumonia! It's not fun, but shit, Lara wrote that page weeks before, but Fletcher doesn't know that now it wouldn't count for shit. Well, fuck. What a screwed up situation this is.
You are an awesome writer, BTW.
2BurstofPassionI knew she had pneumonia! It's not fun, but shit, Lara wrote that page weeks before, but Fletcher doesn't know that now it wouldn't count for shit. Well, fuck. What a screwed up situation this is.
You are an awesome writer, BTW.
11/6/2013 c21 Louyse
Your writing is fricken extraordinary! fan girl-ing here. You create palpable experiences with your words. I love love love This story. The characters, the pacing, the swirl of emotion, the experience of being there in the thick of it. Your descriptions rock.
Your writing is fricken extraordinary! fan girl-ing here. You create palpable experiences with your words. I love love love This story. The characters, the pacing, the swirl of emotion, the experience of being there in the thick of it. Your descriptions rock.
11/5/2013 c20 1Sui Lestrange
just caught up with the story, absolutely loved this chapter. I'm really curious on what happens next.
1Sui Lestrangejust caught up with the story, absolutely loved this chapter. I'm really curious on what happens next.
11/3/2013 c21 nanina15
I just knew it he was going to get the Big Blue someday and read that note she wrote about him. I was hoping she'd rip it out and throw it away tho. Update soon!
I just knew it he was going to get the Big Blue someday and read that note she wrote about him. I was hoping she'd rip it out and throw it away tho. Update soon!
11/3/2013 c10 Aly
Hi,
I've been a longtime reader of your wonderful stories. I really appreciate your posting of these stories for us to enjoy freely on this website. You are one of the few authors I keep coming back for to see what world of characters you have Co. even with next. I hope that you get published one day and we can return to you what is due by buying copies of your novels. Anywho, I'm an American reader from NJ, sometimes it can be difficult to understand some of the Aussie slang, maybe in the future you can add a bit if translation at the end note? Although, I must admit I enjoy researching Aussie culture and slang. In conclusion, I wanted to applaud your work and writing. Best wishes, and here's to your constant updates!
Hi,
I've been a longtime reader of your wonderful stories. I really appreciate your posting of these stories for us to enjoy freely on this website. You are one of the few authors I keep coming back for to see what world of characters you have Co. even with next. I hope that you get published one day and we can return to you what is due by buying copies of your novels. Anywho, I'm an American reader from NJ, sometimes it can be difficult to understand some of the Aussie slang, maybe in the future you can add a bit if translation at the end note? Although, I must admit I enjoy researching Aussie culture and slang. In conclusion, I wanted to applaud your work and writing. Best wishes, and here's to your constant updates!
10/31/2013 c21 cerulean sea
Hi Jess!
It's been ages since I've been on FictionPress with the whole plagiarism nonsense. I'm so ecstatic to see you're still on here with a new story to boot! :) I don't know if you've ever seen Gossip Girl, but Lara somewhat reminds me of Blair Waldorf with her cold hearted demeanor towards Fletcher. I think your story is refreshing, and I can't wait to see any upcoming chapters or whatever stories you plan on writing next. :)
Sincerely,
Kristi
Hi Jess!
It's been ages since I've been on FictionPress with the whole plagiarism nonsense. I'm so ecstatic to see you're still on here with a new story to boot! :) I don't know if you've ever seen Gossip Girl, but Lara somewhat reminds me of Blair Waldorf with her cold hearted demeanor towards Fletcher. I think your story is refreshing, and I can't wait to see any upcoming chapters or whatever stories you plan on writing next. :)
Sincerely,
Kristi