for The Do-Gooder8/8/2013 c19 NverSayNver
I loved it! Lara goes to hating him to wanting to cuddle with him! It's great! I loved it and can't wait for the next update!
I loved it! Lara goes to hating him to wanting to cuddle with him! It's great! I loved it and can't wait for the next update!
8/8/2013 c19 Carson's-girl
im loving this story. literally at the edge of my seat. cant wait for the next chapter. i just wanted to say i love these characters, theyre so real and lifelike and i can see parts of them within my own group of friends. BRAVO!
im loving this story. literally at the edge of my seat. cant wait for the next chapter. i just wanted to say i love these characters, theyre so real and lifelike and i can see parts of them within my own group of friends. BRAVO!
8/8/2013 c19 PC
Why on earth did I go through this so fast? I should've savored it more, gedemmet. Lara and Fletch are giving me tingles all over, what with all the kissing and cheek-on-hair and back-on-chest action going on (lol whuuut?). And Lara chowing down on her noodles and presenting the telltale signs of a cold just screams "I AM HUMAN," like a reminder of how out of it she was these past few chapters.
I'm also kind of waiting for an epic bromance makeup session from Fletch and Daz. All this unresolved tension is making me blush. But no pressure. Haha.
Thanks for the chapter. Cheers! :)
Why on earth did I go through this so fast? I should've savored it more, gedemmet. Lara and Fletch are giving me tingles all over, what with all the kissing and cheek-on-hair and back-on-chest action going on (lol whuuut?). And Lara chowing down on her noodles and presenting the telltale signs of a cold just screams "I AM HUMAN," like a reminder of how out of it she was these past few chapters.
I'm also kind of waiting for an epic bromance makeup session from Fletch and Daz. All this unresolved tension is making me blush. But no pressure. Haha.
Thanks for the chapter. Cheers! :)
8/8/2013 c19 Melissa
Nothing I'm particularly to say but I'm waiting for things to come to a head where these two finally ready have it out and quit holding back part of themselves to maintain their relationship. I want to see them happy and I'm dying to get there! Another good one but not much to it. But I feel like you were just laying more framework. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Nothing I'm particularly to say but I'm waiting for things to come to a head where these two finally ready have it out and quit holding back part of themselves to maintain their relationship. I want to see them happy and I'm dying to get there! Another good one but not much to it. But I feel like you were just laying more framework. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
8/8/2013 c19 jmeec316
Eek. For some reason I feel like I need a hug after this chapter. Are your characters projecting their needs onto me?
Eek. For some reason I feel like I need a hug after this chapter. Are your characters projecting their needs onto me?
8/8/2013 c19 meaganmarie5
I loved the way Laura snuggled (okay not exactly snuggled but still) up to Fletch on the couch. She's letting her guard down in her own little way. I only hope Fletch keeps trying to get through to her. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I loved the way Laura snuggled (okay not exactly snuggled but still) up to Fletch on the couch. She's letting her guard down in her own little way. I only hope Fletch keeps trying to get through to her. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/8/2013 c19 
9AKhwab
Good chapter. I understood stuff and more. Sucks that Daz and Fletch didn't clear up but whatever. This is real. I mean whatever you have written is realistic. So glad you finally updated. It had been so long since the last update that for a while there, I couldn't remember what was going on. I am not complaining tho :)
9AKhwabGood chapter. I understood stuff and more. Sucks that Daz and Fletch didn't clear up but whatever. This is real. I mean whatever you have written is realistic. So glad you finally updated. It had been so long since the last update that for a while there, I couldn't remember what was going on. I am not complaining tho :)
8/7/2013 c19 1MalloryStryker
Today is the best day ever. I only stayed up this late because its my birthday and cake wa necessary at 12am THEN BAM, UPDATE. Best birthday ever. I loved this chapter, kinda wished I could've seen the conversation or lack of between Daz ad Fletch. Merry just makes my day. No matter how much Lara pretends she doesn't care, Merry just gets it. And Saskia as well, love her hidden concern. Fletch is just perfect and I love the way he understands Lara so well. I just feel like he's giving so much more than Lara will ever give him and ugh Lara he's perfect. I cannot wait till the day where Daz just lets it all out of Lara and maybe she'll see the light.
You are awesome as always! Can't wait for re next one :)
-Mallory Stryker
1MalloryStrykerToday is the best day ever. I only stayed up this late because its my birthday and cake wa necessary at 12am THEN BAM, UPDATE. Best birthday ever. I loved this chapter, kinda wished I could've seen the conversation or lack of between Daz ad Fletch. Merry just makes my day. No matter how much Lara pretends she doesn't care, Merry just gets it. And Saskia as well, love her hidden concern. Fletch is just perfect and I love the way he understands Lara so well. I just feel like he's giving so much more than Lara will ever give him and ugh Lara he's perfect. I cannot wait till the day where Daz just lets it all out of Lara and maybe she'll see the light.
You are awesome as always! Can't wait for re next one :)
-Mallory Stryker
8/6/2013 c1 na na na batman
i did love d chapter. i feel like im on a loop. post the next chapter na?
i did love d chapter. i feel like im on a loop. post the next chapter na?
8/5/2013 c18 7SophieInPink
This story is amazing so far. I think one of its strongest points (and they are numerous) is your talent at description and physicality. I just get such a good sense of all of the character's movements, bodies, all the elements of a scene. I also like how all the chapter titles are song lyrics. I've just read this all in one go while I should've been working on a school assignment, but I don't regret it!
Soph xx
7SophieInPinkThis story is amazing so far. I think one of its strongest points (and they are numerous) is your talent at description and physicality. I just get such a good sense of all of the character's movements, bodies, all the elements of a scene. I also like how all the chapter titles are song lyrics. I've just read this all in one go while I should've been working on a school assignment, but I don't regret it!
Soph xx
8/3/2013 c18 4Kina Kalamari
So for some reason I hadn't read this chapter yet. The alert got a bit lost in my inbox. :/
I really enjoyed the poetic aspects of the bathroom scene. Particularly this: "As usual, it was the thought of what I didn't want to be that forced me to take action." That was unusually insightful, and I loved it. Also, your author's note made me chuckle. :)
4Kina KalamariSo for some reason I hadn't read this chapter yet. The alert got a bit lost in my inbox. :/
I really enjoyed the poetic aspects of the bathroom scene. Particularly this: "As usual, it was the thought of what I didn't want to be that forced me to take action." That was unusually insightful, and I loved it. Also, your author's note made me chuckle. :)
7/31/2013 c18 Elliebit
Yes, definitely thrilled for Fletch and his foreplay lol
Yes, definitely thrilled for Fletch and his foreplay lol
7/29/2013 c18 5This.Texta.Is.Blue
One of the really shit arse things that happen after giving the readers what they want is that the follow up chapter can be really, anti climactic.
In saying this, you really really did an amazing job with this chapter. I originally wasn't going to write a review because i honestly loved it so much and thought it was actually one of the best chapters in the story. I thought that if i didn't have anything to critique then i didn't have to. BUT THEN i was like no, credit where credit is due.
It was an amazing follow up piece, really wonderful and seriously perfect. It makes me really angry, because i pay for shit writing on kindle and sometime i just want to forward some of the authors on this place and just be like: this is how the freak you write!.
5This.Texta.Is.BlueOne of the really shit arse things that happen after giving the readers what they want is that the follow up chapter can be really, anti climactic.
In saying this, you really really did an amazing job with this chapter. I originally wasn't going to write a review because i honestly loved it so much and thought it was actually one of the best chapters in the story. I thought that if i didn't have anything to critique then i didn't have to. BUT THEN i was like no, credit where credit is due.
It was an amazing follow up piece, really wonderful and seriously perfect. It makes me really angry, because i pay for shit writing on kindle and sometime i just want to forward some of the authors on this place and just be like: this is how the freak you write!.
7/28/2013 c18 hm
Thank you for the update! Even though I know this chapter is an important setup, not as much happens plotwise as in previous chapters. -_-
I wish it were longer so we could see some of what happens after Lara wakes...
Thank you for the update! Even though I know this chapter is an important setup, not as much happens plotwise as in previous chapters. -_-
I wish it were longer so we could see some of what happens after Lara wakes...