for The Do-Gooder12/29/2013 c24 
6imperfectlyokay
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This was brilliant. As always, your story is perfection. I don't even have any words. But I can say that I'm so incredibly happy that you're going ahead with e-publishing! I really wish you all the best with that, it's super exciting! Keep writing and keep all of us posted about your publishing!
6imperfectlyokay...
This was brilliant. As always, your story is perfection. I don't even have any words. But I can say that I'm so incredibly happy that you're going ahead with e-publishing! I really wish you all the best with that, it's super exciting! Keep writing and keep all of us posted about your publishing!
12/26/2013 c24 1MileyRowling
I really enjoyed reading this and I'm glad you're going to the next level. Great work!
1MileyRowlingI really enjoyed reading this and I'm glad you're going to the next level. Great work!
12/20/2013 c24 1Jevanminx
Love it as always. A fitting ending I feel, managing to encompass where everyone had got without making it seem like a 'Where are they now?' scene.
Spinoffs? For Sass maybe...
JM
1JevanminxLove it as always. A fitting ending I feel, managing to encompass where everyone had got without making it seem like a 'Where are they now?' scene.
Spinoffs? For Sass maybe...
JM
12/20/2013 c24 1See For
Great ending, I love having that extra bit of closure coming down from the crazy emotional high of the previous chapter. Loved this story as well - you're making it hard for me to pick favourites!
Also did I hear you say publishing?! I'm so glad! I was going to mention something in my last review about it but thought it might be better if I let you wrap this one up first. Great to hear that others are encouraging the same for you though - I think it's a brilliant step in the right direction for you and I can't wait to hear more about it. Keep us posted, I know I'm not the only one of your readers who would love to hear more. And as usual, thank you for being you :)
1See ForGreat ending, I love having that extra bit of closure coming down from the crazy emotional high of the previous chapter. Loved this story as well - you're making it hard for me to pick favourites!
Also did I hear you say publishing?! I'm so glad! I was going to mention something in my last review about it but thought it might be better if I let you wrap this one up first. Great to hear that others are encouraging the same for you though - I think it's a brilliant step in the right direction for you and I can't wait to hear more about it. Keep us posted, I know I'm not the only one of your readers who would love to hear more. And as usual, thank you for being you :)
12/18/2013 c24 Eliza
You are just an amazing writer. I love the way you write the characters, the way they grow throughout the story. And your plots? Incredibly unique and you just can't get enough of it. On my way to reading the rest of your stories (instead of studying for finals)!
You are just an amazing writer. I love the way you write the characters, the way they grow throughout the story. And your plots? Incredibly unique and you just can't get enough of it. On my way to reading the rest of your stories (instead of studying for finals)!
12/17/2013 c24 Pseudonym59
If there's one thing I love about your writing, it's the way you flesh out your characters. Each one is unique, yet not one feels contrived. You breathe a real type sort of life into them, and that's something most writers can't do - not just on here, but published ones as well. It's one of the things that make you one of my favorite authors (if not my favorite).
I also love how your stories aren't just romance. I mean they are romance, but there's so much more to them, so much to take away. There are relevant themes that reach into almost every branch of reality, and I think it's really great.
Best of luck to you! :) I can't wait to buy your books!
If there's one thing I love about your writing, it's the way you flesh out your characters. Each one is unique, yet not one feels contrived. You breathe a real type sort of life into them, and that's something most writers can't do - not just on here, but published ones as well. It's one of the things that make you one of my favorite authors (if not my favorite).
I also love how your stories aren't just romance. I mean they are romance, but there's so much more to them, so much to take away. There are relevant themes that reach into almost every branch of reality, and I think it's really great.
Best of luck to you! :) I can't wait to buy your books!
12/16/2013 c24 Mads
*high-pitched happy sounds only audible to dogs of keen hearing*
You know those stories that ignite that rousing glow right under your ribcage and end in such a lovely way that you want to cry a little? This did that for me. I wish you all the best with your e-publishing endeavours! You have such a way with words and characters - the world deserves to know that!
*high-pitched happy sounds only audible to dogs of keen hearing*
You know those stories that ignite that rousing glow right under your ribcage and end in such a lovely way that you want to cry a little? This did that for me. I wish you all the best with your e-publishing endeavours! You have such a way with words and characters - the world deserves to know that!
12/16/2013 c24 Irrelevant
I'm really going to miss this story's regular updates. I've absolutely loved getting to know the characters and their inner-workings, and can't wait to see what you come up with next. Write more soon!
I'm really going to miss this story's regular updates. I've absolutely loved getting to know the characters and their inner-workings, and can't wait to see what you come up with next. Write more soon!
12/16/2013 c24 Choukou
Please please please keep writing! You're a fantastic writer and characters spring to life at your fingers. I look forward to more stories (pretty please?)
Please please please keep writing! You're a fantastic writer and characters spring to life at your fingers. I look forward to more stories (pretty please?)
12/16/2013 c24 Canada 1
Wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing your talent. I will keep an eye out for your next story, and good luck with the e-publishing.
BTW: Canadians don't have accents, that's you Aussies. :)
Wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing your talent. I will keep an eye out for your next story, and good luck with the e-publishing.
BTW: Canadians don't have accents, that's you Aussies. :)
12/16/2013 c24 6happysally
Oh my GOSH.
What a perfect ending! I loved this story since I started reading it, and it's sad to see it's come to and end, but I definitely love how everything's wrapped up nicely, it's oh so satisfying.
Thanks so much for writing this, I know I probably wouldn't have the patience or creativity to write something this good.
Hope the e-publishing goes great and can't wait for the next one!
6happysallyOh my GOSH.
What a perfect ending! I loved this story since I started reading it, and it's sad to see it's come to and end, but I definitely love how everything's wrapped up nicely, it's oh so satisfying.
Thanks so much for writing this, I know I probably wouldn't have the patience or creativity to write something this good.
Hope the e-publishing goes great and can't wait for the next one!
12/16/2013 c24 crazydaisyyy
3 cheers for the epilogue. Btw so sweet of u to reply all of my comments! Looking forward to more of ur fab stories. All the best with ur e-publishing :-)
3 cheers for the epilogue. Btw so sweet of u to reply all of my comments! Looking forward to more of ur fab stories. All the best with ur e-publishing :-)
12/16/2013 c24 MCM315
It's over! Sad, but a happy ending, which always makes it better :) And I love how it was Fletch's POV that ended it. Perfect ending.
It wasn't surprising that Lara ended up an event organizer/planner. It's a perfect job for her. She still seems tough and abrasive, but in a good way now, if that makes sense. She's still Lara, yet she's now in control of her life. For someone always wanted to be in control, she actually didn't really have control before since the guilt was weighing her down so much. And Fletch is the rock she needs, the support, someone to be there for her when she needed a shoulder to lean on.
A great wrap-up to a superb story! Good luck with the publishing, too. I know how tedious editing/revising can be, so, really, good luck, and if you need any help/an editor/proofreader to read anything before you publish, just let me know :) I'd be happy to help! Sometimes you need another pair of eyes to catch things you yourself don't. So, I'm here for you if you need me. Just send me an e-mail.
Congratulations, Jess, on another completed story! And thank you so much for sharing your talent. As always, it's a pleasure to read your work. :)
It's over! Sad, but a happy ending, which always makes it better :) And I love how it was Fletch's POV that ended it. Perfect ending.
It wasn't surprising that Lara ended up an event organizer/planner. It's a perfect job for her. She still seems tough and abrasive, but in a good way now, if that makes sense. She's still Lara, yet she's now in control of her life. For someone always wanted to be in control, she actually didn't really have control before since the guilt was weighing her down so much. And Fletch is the rock she needs, the support, someone to be there for her when she needed a shoulder to lean on.
A great wrap-up to a superb story! Good luck with the publishing, too. I know how tedious editing/revising can be, so, really, good luck, and if you need any help/an editor/proofreader to read anything before you publish, just let me know :) I'd be happy to help! Sometimes you need another pair of eyes to catch things you yourself don't. So, I'm here for you if you need me. Just send me an e-mail.
Congratulations, Jess, on another completed story! And thank you so much for sharing your talent. As always, it's a pleasure to read your work. :)
12/16/2013 c23 MCM315
:) I love that song, too. And this chapter. Poor Saskia, but she's strong enough to get through anything. And I loved how Lara was there for her.
Finally, Lara's awareness of what she had been putting Fletch through was realized by her. Now the healing can really begin and they can deal with it together.
Just the epilogue now! I don't want to see this story end, but I can't wait for something new from you (no pressure) lol.
:) I love that song, too. And this chapter. Poor Saskia, but she's strong enough to get through anything. And I loved how Lara was there for her.
Finally, Lara's awareness of what she had been putting Fletch through was realized by her. Now the healing can really begin and they can deal with it together.
Just the epilogue now! I don't want to see this story end, but I can't wait for something new from you (no pressure) lol.
12/16/2013 c24 2auroraglider
Wow! I know that is a small word but it is a very powerful word. To me it is a way to express my utter amazement when I am at a loss for words. That epilogue was the perfectly, most scrumptiddliocious frosting on an already amazingly incredible cake! You are so great at what you do; which of course is entertain us with your wonderful imagination through your writing. Now I not only have "monkeys" as a replacement for a much less acceptable word but when I find myself or others in a helping situation merely because we are needed as well as fully capable of helping, I label us as "do-gooders." Good luck (not that you need luck, your talent speaks that loud and clear) with any future publishing ventures. Most of all, Thank You for sharing with us.
2auroragliderWow! I know that is a small word but it is a very powerful word. To me it is a way to express my utter amazement when I am at a loss for words. That epilogue was the perfectly, most scrumptiddliocious frosting on an already amazingly incredible cake! You are so great at what you do; which of course is entertain us with your wonderful imagination through your writing. Now I not only have "monkeys" as a replacement for a much less acceptable word but when I find myself or others in a helping situation merely because we are needed as well as fully capable of helping, I label us as "do-gooders." Good luck (not that you need luck, your talent speaks that loud and clear) with any future publishing ventures. Most of all, Thank You for sharing with us.