for The Do-Gooder12/15/2013 c24 
1Spiked Angel
I've loved and read and re-read and re-re-read all your stories, and they always leave me profoundly emotionally touched, but I identified so, so much with Lara. I wish I had read this when I was in high school, cause it really would have helped me understand myself better. This is so beautiful, and I think you're aiming too low with e-publishing. You should definitely just write legit novels, because I would love to hold one of your books in my hands. Best of luck!
1Spiked AngelI've loved and read and re-read and re-re-read all your stories, and they always leave me profoundly emotionally touched, but I identified so, so much with Lara. I wish I had read this when I was in high school, cause it really would have helped me understand myself better. This is so beautiful, and I think you're aiming too low with e-publishing. You should definitely just write legit novels, because I would love to hold one of your books in my hands. Best of luck!
12/15/2013 c24 Melissa
Thanks for this epilogue and for giving the finish through both Lara and Fletch's perspective. They deserve their happily ever after! And I'm super excited to hear about you giving e- books/stories a go. Today was Christmas with the family and this was my favorite gift. :) thank you and happy holidays.
Thanks for this epilogue and for giving the finish through both Lara and Fletch's perspective. They deserve their happily ever after! And I'm super excited to hear about you giving e- books/stories a go. Today was Christmas with the family and this was my favorite gift. :) thank you and happy holidays.
12/15/2013 c24 hirokiri9
this has been an amazing journey. reading all your fics. i hope your never stop. fyi...i fangirled when you pmed me back on a review. i must write back to you soon. but as for this story, i have to say, i'm going to miss fletch, lara, daz, merry, stefano and everyone! i loved it to death. thank you so much! you've brightened up my day! X3
this has been an amazing journey. reading all your fics. i hope your never stop. fyi...i fangirled when you pmed me back on a review. i must write back to you soon. but as for this story, i have to say, i'm going to miss fletch, lara, daz, merry, stefano and everyone! i loved it to death. thank you so much! you've brightened up my day! X3
12/15/2013 c24 1Lil Bazza
Do it - publish. Although, I hope that doesn't stop you from writing here. However, I'd definitely buy your new stuff, so if you're going to go all capitalist, I'm cool. I'd support you. (I'm an Australian living in America, I feel like the little communist who could, even though I'm not. But whatever.)
I loved the ending. I love how Lara's ending was like, let's get back to business, and Fletch was all, I'm so happy, I'm so in love. I think it captured their personalities so well. (I read this sober this morning, and I'm writing this review drunk this evening. I keep have to retype everything, so I apologise if something gets through!) And I'm glad you did both perspectives endings: I think I was a little shocked when I got there to see Fletch's POV - but then I was like, it wouldn't be the same if it wasn't.
Anyway - can't wait to read the new stuff, whether it be on here or somewhere else. Good luck - it's going to be tough, but e-publishing is pretty straightfoward, right?
Happy Holidays!
Jen
(I have this sudden longing. I have no idea if you're going to write again on here, I mean, except as a direction for the voices in your head. And even though I didn't like her, I think I'm going to miss Lara. Or I'm going to miss Fletch. Ahh, but the sense of accomplishment as to getting to the end. You've always been my favourite writer on here. I love reading your stuff.) Oh, I should sleep.
Keep writing!
1Lil BazzaDo it - publish. Although, I hope that doesn't stop you from writing here. However, I'd definitely buy your new stuff, so if you're going to go all capitalist, I'm cool. I'd support you. (I'm an Australian living in America, I feel like the little communist who could, even though I'm not. But whatever.)
I loved the ending. I love how Lara's ending was like, let's get back to business, and Fletch was all, I'm so happy, I'm so in love. I think it captured their personalities so well. (I read this sober this morning, and I'm writing this review drunk this evening. I keep have to retype everything, so I apologise if something gets through!) And I'm glad you did both perspectives endings: I think I was a little shocked when I got there to see Fletch's POV - but then I was like, it wouldn't be the same if it wasn't.
Anyway - can't wait to read the new stuff, whether it be on here or somewhere else. Good luck - it's going to be tough, but e-publishing is pretty straightfoward, right?
Happy Holidays!
Jen
(I have this sudden longing. I have no idea if you're going to write again on here, I mean, except as a direction for the voices in your head. And even though I didn't like her, I think I'm going to miss Lara. Or I'm going to miss Fletch. Ahh, but the sense of accomplishment as to getting to the end. You've always been my favourite writer on here. I love reading your stuff.) Oh, I should sleep.
Keep writing!
12/15/2013 c24 5iCY the Polar Kid
Aw nooooo it is the end! Oh the bittersweet taste aslkdfj
I can't wait to see how that e-publishing thing goes for you :3
and I cannot wait to see what other stories you have planned :)
Thank you so much for sharing with us your story full of hard work, dedication and your brilliant, wonderful, creative mind!
5iCY the Polar KidAw nooooo it is the end! Oh the bittersweet taste aslkdfj
I can't wait to see how that e-publishing thing goes for you :3
and I cannot wait to see what other stories you have planned :)
Thank you so much for sharing with us your story full of hard work, dedication and your brilliant, wonderful, creative mind!
12/15/2013 c24 Millie
ABSOLUTELY PERFECT. Cannot even describe how much I loved the story and how brilliant the ending is :') Congratulations!
ABSOLUTELY PERFECT. Cannot even describe how much I loved the story and how brilliant the ending is :') Congratulations!
12/15/2013 c21 MCM315
Lara finally broke down. I loved the scene between her and her mother. It was very emotional. I think Lara is finally starting to heal. And I liked how her mother said Lara wasn't to blame for what happened when Donny died. Very well done.
And then Fletch reads what Lara wrote about him. Oh, boy. And Saskia is at the police station. So much going on!
Sorry I'm so behind. I'm catching up, though! :)
Lara finally broke down. I loved the scene between her and her mother. It was very emotional. I think Lara is finally starting to heal. And I liked how her mother said Lara wasn't to blame for what happened when Donny died. Very well done.
And then Fletch reads what Lara wrote about him. Oh, boy. And Saskia is at the police station. So much going on!
Sorry I'm so behind. I'm catching up, though! :)
12/15/2013 c24 Shooting Star
gawwd that was amazing! Im sat in front of my laptop crying with happiness because it was such a perfect ending and also a little a bit of sadness because the story is finished! You are a beautiful writer and i think you should definitely go into e-publishing! now im off to read it all over again!
gawwd that was amazing! Im sat in front of my laptop crying with happiness because it was such a perfect ending and also a little a bit of sadness because the story is finished! You are a beautiful writer and i think you should definitely go into e-publishing! now im off to read it all over again!
12/15/2013 c24 jerrellsgirl112606
I just love the ending it was amazing! If you get any of your stories e-published please let me know. Keep up the amazing work and pleas get out a new amazing story I want to read more.
I just love the ending it was amazing! If you get any of your stories e-published please let me know. Keep up the amazing work and pleas get out a new amazing story I want to read more.
12/15/2013 c24 2asianinvasion0530
Awww man I'm sad this is the end but I loved how you wrapped up this story! Event management seems like the perfect job for Lara and I'm so glad that she and Fletch got engaged, Saskia is still snarky and awesome and like Lara's little sister, Merry is pregnant, Stefano came out to his family, and Livvy is writing an awesome feminist Master's thesis!
Can't wait to read more of your writing and GO YOU for getting ready to e-publish! You are sure to be successful and I will definitely give glowing reviews when they come out! :D
2asianinvasion0530Awww man I'm sad this is the end but I loved how you wrapped up this story! Event management seems like the perfect job for Lara and I'm so glad that she and Fletch got engaged, Saskia is still snarky and awesome and like Lara's little sister, Merry is pregnant, Stefano came out to his family, and Livvy is writing an awesome feminist Master's thesis!
Can't wait to read more of your writing and GO YOU for getting ready to e-publish! You are sure to be successful and I will definitely give glowing reviews when they come out! :D
12/15/2013 c24 NverSayNver
I hate that I can't log into FictionPress with my ID! Ugh! But I loved it! This was adorable and I loved the story! I can't wait for you to write more and you're e books! I really loved the story and ai loved the adorableness of these characters!
I hate that I can't log into FictionPress with my ID! Ugh! But I loved it! This was adorable and I loved the story! I can't wait for you to write more and you're e books! I really loved the story and ai loved the adorableness of these characters!
12/15/2013 c24 ess3sandra
wow! great story, awesome ending! it all came together so nicely! I will definitely buy your books when you e-publish them!
wow! great story, awesome ending! it all came together so nicely! I will definitely buy your books when you e-publish them!
12/15/2013 c24 PC
Tears of joy are dribbling down my cheeks, along with all the less-picturesque fluids associated with crying. Okay, tmi.
I'm glad that your characters still maintained their usual personalities sans pregnant Merry being not-so-merry (love her anyway). Saskia's sass (yay for the alliteration! Everyone loves alliterations!) just cracks me up, and every time Fletch calls Lara 'babe', I see it not as an annoying pet name but as a sexy-sweet endearment that makes me want to melt on the spot. But of course, my highest praises go to Lara (and to you too, being the author, of course). Anything she does just screams FIERCE and EMPOWERED WOMAN and I am spazzing because she is just... WOW. I can't even find the words.
I'm elated that you've decided to go e-publishing! Please do update us whenever you can. I'd REALLY LOVE to support you on that endeavor. :D
Fantastic story overall. Made me cry and squeal and melt tons (in a good way). I will really miss the gang, but I feel that the story's as complete as it should be. Cheers! :)
Tears of joy are dribbling down my cheeks, along with all the less-picturesque fluids associated with crying. Okay, tmi.
I'm glad that your characters still maintained their usual personalities sans pregnant Merry being not-so-merry (love her anyway). Saskia's sass (yay for the alliteration! Everyone loves alliterations!) just cracks me up, and every time Fletch calls Lara 'babe', I see it not as an annoying pet name but as a sexy-sweet endearment that makes me want to melt on the spot. But of course, my highest praises go to Lara (and to you too, being the author, of course). Anything she does just screams FIERCE and EMPOWERED WOMAN and I am spazzing because she is just... WOW. I can't even find the words.
I'm elated that you've decided to go e-publishing! Please do update us whenever you can. I'd REALLY LOVE to support you on that endeavor. :D
Fantastic story overall. Made me cry and squeal and melt tons (in a good way). I will really miss the gang, but I feel that the story's as complete as it should be. Cheers! :)
12/15/2013 c24 sootyxsnowpetal
Thanks for another great story, with a good and satisfying ending to boot. Finals are just around the corner, and in my caffeinated haze this made me smile and not be completely stressed! I've got to thank you for all your time and dedication, and of course, all those voices in your head that keep you doing what you're great at doing. Thank you thank you thank you!
I'm looking forward to whatever you're conspiring to do next. You can bet on it! :)
Thanks for another great story, with a good and satisfying ending to boot. Finals are just around the corner, and in my caffeinated haze this made me smile and not be completely stressed! I've got to thank you for all your time and dedication, and of course, all those voices in your head that keep you doing what you're great at doing. Thank you thank you thank you!
I'm looking forward to whatever you're conspiring to do next. You can bet on it! :)
12/15/2013 c24 Guest
Thank you for finishing a fabulous story. I'm going to miss them!
Thank you for finishing a fabulous story. I'm going to miss them!