for The Do-Gooder12/15/2013 c24 
1Damned to heaven
"Yeah," he confirmed. "This is good. This is what I wanted."
Now, THAT was just the perfect sentence(s) to end this...
Y'know when you read a great book and you're left all hazy and with that hey-that-was-perfect-but-I-wish-I-hadn't-given-into-temptation-and-devoured-it-instead-of-savouring-it feeling? Yeah, that.
I loved it. It wasn't soppy, it wasn't sappy, it was perfect. I still can't decide who I like more: Fletch or Lara? Good thing they're together and I don't have to pick sides! Oh man, may just have to give this a re-read right now, now that I'm thinking of all those awesome moments your incredible work had to offer!
Every time I read a chapter I wanted to level a review so I'd leave the page open, and whenever I got back from whatever had diverted my attention, I got lazy and exited the page so yeah I apologise. It wasn't you, it was me...being incredibly lazy.
1Damned to heaven"Yeah," he confirmed. "This is good. This is what I wanted."
Now, THAT was just the perfect sentence(s) to end this...
Y'know when you read a great book and you're left all hazy and with that hey-that-was-perfect-but-I-wish-I-hadn't-given-into-temptation-and-devoured-it-instead-of-savouring-it feeling? Yeah, that.
I loved it. It wasn't soppy, it wasn't sappy, it was perfect. I still can't decide who I like more: Fletch or Lara? Good thing they're together and I don't have to pick sides! Oh man, may just have to give this a re-read right now, now that I'm thinking of all those awesome moments your incredible work had to offer!
Every time I read a chapter I wanted to level a review so I'd leave the page open, and whenever I got back from whatever had diverted my attention, I got lazy and exited the page so yeah I apologise. It wasn't you, it was me...being incredibly lazy.
12/15/2013 c24 Guest
Amazing story. A little sad it's over but your writing is so so good
Amazing story. A little sad it's over but your writing is so so good
12/15/2013 c24 jmeec316
"This is good. This is what I wanted." Do those words parallel what you were feeling as you finished up the story?
Because it was a wonderful story. I absolutely loved everything about it: the characters and the lives you created for them. I'm going to miss them :)
Let us know when you e-publish!
"This is good. This is what I wanted." Do those words parallel what you were feeling as you finished up the story?
Because it was a wonderful story. I absolutely loved everything about it: the characters and the lives you created for them. I'm going to miss them :)
Let us know when you e-publish!
12/15/2013 c24 8theKnobblyKneedWriter
I'm not sure what I'm going to be looking forward to now this is done..
8theKnobblyKneedWriterI'm not sure what I'm going to be looking forward to now this is done..
12/15/2013 c24 Lucasta
This was a brilliant story and I'm sad to see it end. Thank you for giving us a glimpse into their lives in the future and I love the fact you ended with Fletch's point of view.
This was a brilliant story and I'm sad to see it end. Thank you for giving us a glimpse into their lives in the future and I love the fact you ended with Fletch's point of view.
12/15/2013 c24 23rd Bookworm
I might cry now that it's over! But it was yet another amazing chapter.
Keep writing.
23rd BookwormI might cry now that it's over! But it was yet another amazing chapter.
Keep writing.
12/15/2013 c24 Guest
Published? That's fantastic!
Published? That's fantastic!
12/15/2013 c24 72898
this was great. thanks for sharing.
this was great. thanks for sharing.
12/15/2013 c24 9AKhwab
This is an appropriate epilogue. It was delightfully tasteful and very real. Nothing changed muh but there is still some kind of progress, you know. Somehow, Fletch and Lara just remind me of an old couple. Not old in terms of age but instead; old in terms of experiences and bond. I think that my thinking that without your actually saying it is a very good thing. I am so glad with the ending and I am happy that you are exploring bigger waters :) All the best! Keep writing! I feel like I have just watched a niece or nephew or godchild of mine grow up :')
9AKhwabThis is an appropriate epilogue. It was delightfully tasteful and very real. Nothing changed muh but there is still some kind of progress, you know. Somehow, Fletch and Lara just remind me of an old couple. Not old in terms of age but instead; old in terms of experiences and bond. I think that my thinking that without your actually saying it is a very good thing. I am so glad with the ending and I am happy that you are exploring bigger waters :) All the best! Keep writing! I feel like I have just watched a niece or nephew or godchild of mine grow up :')
12/15/2013 c24 1KoriLee123
This was a great wrap up(: I love the story! You did a wonderful job, as always.
1KoriLee123This was a great wrap up(: I love the story! You did a wonderful job, as always.
12/13/2013 c23 daresa09
Fucking Russ . I want to kill him . I'm so happy he got arrested ! And Sass , thank the Jesus she's not wallowing in self-blame . She didn't seem like someone who would though . She's too badass . I'm not sure what to say about Daz . He's a ride or die for real . I really want to dislike him for being an asshole , but he's right ... Ugh , he's right . I respect him . Ugh . I was thinking up something to say about Fletch and Lara getting together , but all I have to say is FINALLY .
Fucking Russ . I want to kill him . I'm so happy he got arrested ! And Sass , thank the Jesus she's not wallowing in self-blame . She didn't seem like someone who would though . She's too badass . I'm not sure what to say about Daz . He's a ride or die for real . I really want to dislike him for being an asshole , but he's right ... Ugh , he's right . I respect him . Ugh . I was thinking up something to say about Fletch and Lara getting together , but all I have to say is FINALLY .
12/9/2013 c23 1See For
Stop making me cry all the time like some blubbering idiot, gah!
Actually no, don't, that's totally a lie.
Sorry I missed out on the last few chapters - for some reason these alerts went and hid elsewhere in my email and I'm still incredibly bitter about that. Was actually getting worried that something had gone wrong and I would never see the outcome of this again, so I'm glad that I went hunting.
You, m'lady, are a special thing and I never want you to forget that. Continuing to look forward to what you write in the future 3
1See ForStop making me cry all the time like some blubbering idiot, gah!
Actually no, don't, that's totally a lie.
Sorry I missed out on the last few chapters - for some reason these alerts went and hid elsewhere in my email and I'm still incredibly bitter about that. Was actually getting worried that something had gone wrong and I would never see the outcome of this again, so I'm glad that I went hunting.
You, m'lady, are a special thing and I never want you to forget that. Continuing to look forward to what you write in the future 3
12/4/2013 c23 2frostykitten
I actually clapped out loud like a pleased toddler when Lara told him she loved him. The cat looked at me like I was crazy, but I'm the only one who talks to her so she's used to me being crazy. Anyway, loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
Frosty
2frostykittenI actually clapped out loud like a pleased toddler when Lara told him she loved him. The cat looked at me like I was crazy, but I'm the only one who talks to her so she's used to me being crazy. Anyway, loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
Frosty
12/3/2013 c23 hirokiri9
yup! just finished reading all of your fics. Took all of thanksgiving break, and sooooooooooo worth it. signed up just so that i could at least write one review and also follow this story and your future ones. first fictionpress author i've ever read and let me tell you, you have raised the bar! looking for fics just like yours now. and i really want to go to Australia now. XD
yup! just finished reading all of your fics. Took all of thanksgiving break, and sooooooooooo worth it. signed up just so that i could at least write one review and also follow this story and your future ones. first fictionpress author i've ever read and let me tell you, you have raised the bar! looking for fics just like yours now. and i really want to go to Australia now. XD