
1/27/2017 c7
6just.a.breeze.in.eternity
it wouldnt let me review ch 6 because i already reviewed it ages ago so imma just drop it in here :))
hi! i miss you and you probably don't get notifications from this site anymore (its been nearly 5 years) but i was going through my favorites and i was reading through this. i really really love these two poems but especially the 1st (hence my stopping to review) because i definitely identify with the protagonist of the first. as a writer, as a character creator, you know. its very short and sweet and i love it a lot, especially paired with its title!

it wouldnt let me review ch 6 because i already reviewed it ages ago so imma just drop it in here :))
hi! i miss you and you probably don't get notifications from this site anymore (its been nearly 5 years) but i was going through my favorites and i was reading through this. i really really love these two poems but especially the 1st (hence my stopping to review) because i definitely identify with the protagonist of the first. as a writer, as a character creator, you know. its very short and sweet and i love it a lot, especially paired with its title!
12/14/2012 c9 just.a.breeze.in.eternity
Okay I realize I already put this in a review somewhere but I really am running out of things to say in reviews. I need inspiration. All your characters have inspiration (including this reporter) yet I can't seem to find any...
Dare I say? Conditioning is fun :O
Oh, hey. Something to put in a review. Imagine that. And yet again, it has nothing to do with the story itself. Heheh, sorry...
(I use wayy too many ellipsis...ellipsisses...ellipsises...daw idk the plural.)
Okay I realize I already put this in a review somewhere but I really am running out of things to say in reviews. I need inspiration. All your characters have inspiration (including this reporter) yet I can't seem to find any...
Dare I say? Conditioning is fun :O
Oh, hey. Something to put in a review. Imagine that. And yet again, it has nothing to do with the story itself. Heheh, sorry...
(I use wayy too many ellipsis...ellipsisses...ellipsises...daw idk the plural.)
12/9/2012 c6 just.a.breeze.in.eternity
"They aren't real.
Characters. Fiction.
Damn, they're cool, though"
Yes. Exactly. Bam.
"They aren't real.
Characters. Fiction.
Damn, they're cool, though"
Yes. Exactly. Bam.
12/7/2012 c5 just.a.breeze.in.eternity
That last one was my favorite yet. Because, come on, *sports*.
Nice pen name.
That last one was my favorite yet. Because, come on, *sports*.
Nice pen name.
11/11/2012 c4 just.a.breeze.in.eternity
I'm running out of things to say in reviews.
Sorry I don't actually leave real reviews.
It isn't a problem... is it?
I like line breaks.
I'm running out of things to say in reviews.
Sorry I don't actually leave real reviews.
It isn't a problem... is it?
I like line breaks.
11/11/2012 c1 just.a.breeze.in.eternity
*sigh* I haven't even finished editing my first chapter and you've got like ten stories up. Shucks.
*sigh* I haven't even finished editing my first chapter and you've got like ten stories up. Shucks.