
11/13/2012 c1
22AFractionOfMySoul
it's so cute, I liked how it was pacy yet not rushed, slow enough, yet not broing. good job

it's so cute, I liked how it was pacy yet not rushed, slow enough, yet not broing. good job
11/12/2012 c1
10jeepers09
I like it. There were a couple of typos but nothing big. But I do like the male POV, I think you did it very well. And it's a good ending!

I like it. There were a couple of typos but nothing big. But I do like the male POV, I think you did it very well. And it's a good ending!
11/11/2012 c1
2artistic dreamer
awww how cute! are you going to continue with this? i would love to read more! :)

awww how cute! are you going to continue with this? i would love to read more! :)