2/10/2013 c1 15Natari Mirumura
A very emotional poem that is done very well. So much can be interpreted from this piece. Amazing job, keep it up :D

11/16/2012 c1 70Naver
The last three lines are very powerful on there on, not to say that the rest was just as good. I almost got a different image for each stanza, which is great! Good poem and continue to write. :)