
6/27/2013 c1
9AKhwab
Aw man. This sucks and to say this REALLY happened to you. The words he said to get out of the relationship? I have gotten THAT before. But for me, it was BEFORE the start of a relationship, not the end. You wrote the story in a very narrative style, like a recount so it wasnt as fun to as a real story with dialogues and all would read. But you managed to capture my interest and hold on to it. So, good job :)

Aw man. This sucks and to say this REALLY happened to you. The words he said to get out of the relationship? I have gotten THAT before. But for me, it was BEFORE the start of a relationship, not the end. You wrote the story in a very narrative style, like a recount so it wasnt as fun to as a real story with dialogues and all would read. But you managed to capture my interest and hold on to it. So, good job :)
4/29/2013 c1
6MissLovelyPrincess
I'm speechless. That was so sad! T.T And was it really true? O.O Wow. And you wrote it so well, too. I'm amazed. :)
Keep writing, I loved it... :D

I'm speechless. That was so sad! T.T And was it really true? O.O Wow. And you wrote it so well, too. I'm amazed. :)
Keep writing, I loved it... :D
11/19/2012 c1 Guest
wow :(
wow :(