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12/31/2012 c1 SunsetSprite
Awesome! . XD
11/26/2012 c1 12BangxDitto
Such a beautifully mature way to state the sideline love.
I know it all too well. Nicely done.

BxD
11/22/2012 c1 nickyO
Again plenty love in your phrasing. The common puddle line, the love you with censorship, the bit about looking at you properly-these elements make the poem stand out and the reader take notice.
11/18/2012 c1 Punslinger
This is a heartbreakingly beautiful cry of love aching
to give itself and knowing it may never be received.

So Australia has accepted the American custom of tea
bags? My English friends tell me it is an offense
against nature and civilization to prepare tea in any
way except from loose leaves.

P.S. I wanted to thank you for your review of my poem
"A Poet's Prayer, second version." But your Private
Message service has been disabled. Anyhow, I'm pleased
that you like the poem enough to add it to your Favorites
list.
11/18/2012 c1 Kati
Aw Anna!

This is really good. I'm very impresses with how your style has changed over the years!

Love you twin :)

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