
7/17/2022 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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Hey! I would like to invite you to join our platform to present a good quality story to our readers! Send me a message if this offer piqued your interest!
4/15/2014 c9 SoulSam
I just devoured these 9 chapters and I am completely obsessed! I think I've found a new favorite author, because your writing style is incredible, well-paced, flows beautifully and very very addicting :) I really really hope you continue this story, I'm a fan (understatement!).
I just devoured these 9 chapters and I am completely obsessed! I think I've found a new favorite author, because your writing style is incredible, well-paced, flows beautifully and very very addicting :) I really really hope you continue this story, I'm a fan (understatement!).
7/22/2013 c9
2RainbowHeart
Okay prepare for a long review...
So I usually don't read unfinished stories because I'm scared ill get too involved or fall in love and it will never be finished! So when I came across this on ADoR I went full steam ahead and read these 9 chapters in less than an hour... Only to realise its not a finished story :( and ho hey I've fallen in love!
This story is amazing! And being honest I've never read a story like it before. I don't mean the storyline; although it is an excellent one, I mean your writing style. I absolutely adore how it's past and present! As we read on we learn more and more and I'm not as blind as I would be had the story only been present day.
The 2 main characters Alex and Rayleigh (fab names btw) are great. I usually don't enjoy stories written from both POV's (mainly because it's so hard to capture a life like guys POV) but you have succeeded in this in a way I've only seen a few times before.
So I'm literally going to BEG you to continue writing! I know I'm not the only person thinking this and I hope more people follow suit and let you know how great of a story you have on your hands because it really is fab. So pleeeease please please write more.
Even if you're stuck you can PM me and ill help with ideas and writing... Anything to read more of this story!
Love
Cathy

Okay prepare for a long review...
So I usually don't read unfinished stories because I'm scared ill get too involved or fall in love and it will never be finished! So when I came across this on ADoR I went full steam ahead and read these 9 chapters in less than an hour... Only to realise its not a finished story :( and ho hey I've fallen in love!
This story is amazing! And being honest I've never read a story like it before. I don't mean the storyline; although it is an excellent one, I mean your writing style. I absolutely adore how it's past and present! As we read on we learn more and more and I'm not as blind as I would be had the story only been present day.
The 2 main characters Alex and Rayleigh (fab names btw) are great. I usually don't enjoy stories written from both POV's (mainly because it's so hard to capture a life like guys POV) but you have succeeded in this in a way I've only seen a few times before.
So I'm literally going to BEG you to continue writing! I know I'm not the only person thinking this and I hope more people follow suit and let you know how great of a story you have on your hands because it really is fab. So pleeeease please please write more.
Even if you're stuck you can PM me and ill help with ideas and writing... Anything to read more of this story!
Love
Cathy
7/1/2013 c9 Little.Ms.Sunshine
Hello! I found this story through ADoR, and I really hope you're planning on continuing it. It's really stellar, and I'm excited to see how everything progresses. :-)
Hello! I found this story through ADoR, and I really hope you're planning on continuing it. It's really stellar, and I'm excited to see how everything progresses. :-)
6/30/2013 c9
5This.Texta.Is.Blue
This is really cute, loving the chemistry between Alex and Rayleigh. Now that we've gotten a little foil of her personality and past, are we going to get more of Alex's?

This is really cute, loving the chemistry between Alex and Rayleigh. Now that we've gotten a little foil of her personality and past, are we going to get more of Alex's?
6/29/2013 c1 This.Texta.Is.Blue
Really awesome first chapter, it was actually really witty! I openly laughed out loud a few times!
Really awesome first chapter, it was actually really witty! I openly laughed out loud a few times!
6/18/2013 c9 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Please continue with this story and update soon! Rayleigh and Alex are just so damn cute! I really want to read more about them!
Please continue with this story and update soon! Rayleigh and Alex are just so damn cute! I really want to read more about them!
3/30/2013 c9
1CRSmith
Please girlfriend please girlfriend please girlfriend please girlfriend PLEASE BE GIRLFRIEND!

Please girlfriend please girlfriend please girlfriend please girlfriend PLEASE BE GIRLFRIEND!
1/30/2013 c1
2Minty F
Hello there!
What first attracted me to this story was the title. (Yay French!) It's perfect for a romance; I think that's what love really is most of the time. Shared madness.
Then the summary hooked me. Concise and interesting, with adult characters out of high school. Sweet.
And then the writing sealed the deal. It's descriptive, realistic, and has a great flow. I also dig the humor. (The casual introduction of Derek Dickhead made me laugh.) All in all, awesome job with this first chapter. I look forward to reading more :)
-MF

Hello there!
What first attracted me to this story was the title. (Yay French!) It's perfect for a romance; I think that's what love really is most of the time. Shared madness.
Then the summary hooked me. Concise and interesting, with adult characters out of high school. Sweet.
And then the writing sealed the deal. It's descriptive, realistic, and has a great flow. I also dig the humor. (The casual introduction of Derek Dickhead made me laugh.) All in all, awesome job with this first chapter. I look forward to reading more :)
-MF