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1/17/2013 c4 Punslinger
Another good chapter. It may not be polite to laugh,
but you make your character's anguish so vivid that it's
amusing to someone who isn't involved with it.
12/31/2012 c3 Punslinger
Very well done so far. You have a good touch for
expressing the excitement and angst of teen-age love,
even if it is only a crush at this point.
12/18/2012 c2 4Lolitroy
Haha :D but why did he flirt with her even if he didn't love her? oh well that question's kind of stupid, but anyway. It's the only thing I haven't liked so far.
12/15/2012 c1 15Natari Mirumura
Very nice, even though it's short. Such short words here said a lot. Amaizng job with that, keep it up :D
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